This is also my first review of a FF after reading them for 4 years i dont know know what possessed me to write one finaly Especialy to a FF such as this but i did, hard to find a good FF on this app after Reading majority of decent ones on FF.net

First post on any Fiction site, why cut off Paragraphs in the first few chapters? It makes it annoying to read, i assume you are going to do it for the Rest of the chapters too, so ill Drop this