So far the story is pretty good I like the main character so please keep updating.!!!

Put him in the boys

If it’s a card launcher it should be up his arm like an assassin creeds blade so that he literally has a trick up his sleeve.

Make a card that stores extra stamina that way he can do more permanent stuff with the stored stamina.

A clone card that makes cards so he never runs out or a different type of clone card that can make a fake him and he can become invisible with a card or a card that reflects attacks.

I actually prefer the tank route personally i hardly see any mc’s go this route sadly, the one that is overused is the necromancer.

As a man i would take whatever there is, i mean come on as long as she doesn’t die a horrible death its ok im not picky.

Hey bro this is pretty good and if you need any ideas or inspiration go to wattpad the app and look for a book called energy by somboodeh. Its on hiatus and has been for a long time but the main character has similar power. so thats it hope it helps in some way or gives some ideas to you.

I love the show heroes I am so happy that someone finally decided to use it and my all-time favorite character Peter petreli.

Amazing and just completely awesome novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok am i the only one thinking this is the weakest kryptonian to ever exist like what the F. forget being a kryptonian this just describes a human with slightly higher lifespan and a little magic. and im not ragging on your character author. im just curious if anyone else feels this way.

Overall this is likly to be one of the best marvel and xmen fanfictions on webnovel in the future. if the author continues with this novel because so far the grammer and idea have been amazing and very original. And so my advice to you auther is if someone is crazy and starts giving you criticism that is not helpful or makes you a better writer just ignore them. a lot of authors on webnovel would have done better if they had ever gotten this advice from someone.

Author I really hope you don’t drop this novel it has a lot of potential to be a very successful fanfic because I mean come on all might in marvel that is a great idea.

Man auther i got to tell you i love your novel it is one of the best marvel books on this site and that is all i need to say really its amazing.

I really hope he gets the canadian super soldier serum that made sentry and he fixes it and uses it mixed with the other super soldier serums....................

Yeah awesome novel author !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And another on here is called Spiderman ultimate Peter Parker.

Another thing and this is my personal opinion that if i was him i would have a invisible force field coating my body at least most of my life even when asleep for training and protection, because the only way you could kill or take out the mc is when he is not expecting to get attacked.

I bet he had two sharp forceField squares on opposite sides and chopped of the head like a freaking guilition when the edges met, man forcefields are op when you know how to use them and some other things why did he stop nomus punchs dead on that takes stamina why not curve the shield so the force is not focused on the shield and there is an easier way to fly all he has to do is coat his body in a forcefield like the room in battle training and make the fied more aerodynamic for faster flight and defense.

Looking at that really makes question where his eyebrows in skeleton might form are.