It really hurts to read it a shame cause it look like a interesting story

Reaven

If you going to change the order of the chapters make sure to check that the chapter is still relvent to the story and no odd parts that make no sense or reveal things that has not happened in the story or pieces you got reed off

Please don't give up it a good story so far also I like the fact that there's no system. Not to knock system storyline just that with Star wars their to many going around and they never finished it

Just continue the story don't let the hater get. you down [img=recommend]

You got something good going don't you dare drop this if you can't go on get someone to help bring it to life