See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

very good beginning, very good story! I tried to do my own character and ended up with a mob one (14 / 11 / 6). though I had fun trying!

thanks for the double release!! hope you come up with another story soon! I love your works!!

get well soon!!!

hi author!! I think you should look again into the male/female articles (his and her) so that your story becomes more readable! it is great so far!! good work! [img=update]