Great Chapter 🤣

first i realy like your Story but your grammer is bad. girls= she/her boys= he/him

mmh i realy like your story but is it not too easy for grod? Pluto did not now much about his character. I now you want too make the story faster but this is not realy his character in the rest of the story I don t understand what Pluto thinks presenting immortality too someone he now nothing about.

I like Siegfried (german name) and diochan is cool too He could beat lu bu and fight in the war of the 3 kingdoms in China i think you chosen apostel are good i think faust would be cool too ... oh and your Story is realy good

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nice ^^

good Light novel! Thank you for your hard work ^^

I live your Story but don t forget you need a Talent for the mindarts peopel without it cannot learn it. (bsp. Harry Potter, Grab and Goyl and even the houselords have diffrent talents in the mindarts)