TheHoblit

Huzzah for Aoi! a long time coming

Oh no, the singularity

congrats on the graduation!!!

if he learns to control time in his dimension more, he could warp each of them in for a full night or longer and then pop back after like a second outside

iterations*

just ironic

second* she got imprisoned in the beginning

This is an enjoyable story with an interesting and unique setting that has enough scale to sustain a pretty long form story. The characters are fun and have great designs. Real world mythology is a strong backbone for the story, so if you like that you will find things in this more interesting.

I would be cool with kids in the epilogue or something, but having them be born in the middle of a war is just dumb

make sure to read the fine print, I have seen other authors get some pretty bad deals from WN, especially the translators on the other half. Good luck in the future, love the story.