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Kyusen4dCommentedYou could always do the original version and once done, do a rewrite/alternate version of how you wished it had gone. Especially if your doing this as a way of improving your story writing and creativity skills. But in the end it IS your story and you should just do what you want
Ch 1 Update- Kyusen21dCommented
Got him and her mixed up here. Author you keep referring Yoshie as a him and he
Yoshie seemed a little impressed by the new scope of his powers, but put his thoughts aside when he saw Yuto's body on the ground. With every step he took, his heart grew heavier, but this time, no tears fell from his face, as if he had gotten over the fact of Yuto's death. - Kyusen25dCommented"Unhand me, strange woman! I-I am very fierce!" Yugito protested but it only riled up Kushina more.
- Kyusen1mthCommented"Go home and tell your father to come to Ishida Hospital. He will know the rest after that."
- Kyusen1mthCommentedThe one who killed it was wearing a back-revealing black ninja cloth. She had long purple hair in a ponytail style and light brown skin.
- Kyusen1mthCommentedThe one who killed it was wearing a back-revealing black ninja cloth. She had long purple hair in a ponytail style and light brown skin.
- Kyusen1mthCommentedThe one who killed it was wearing a back-revealing black ninja cloth. She had long purple hair in a ponytail style and light brown skin.
- Kyusen1mthCommented
What I imagine this version of Cass to be like when getting excited
Those hypnotizing headpats weren't the only thing the Dead End had to offer. Father 'praised' (for as much as he could praise anything) the bar's neutrality and the de-escalation that came with it. Sister Barbara fumed at the overwhelming, paperwork-creating stories told within. And Sister Cass simply would not SHUT UP about Sean himself. - Kyusen1mthCommentedThose hypnotizing headpats weren't the only thing the Dead End had to offer. Father 'praised' (for as much as he could praise anything) the bar's neutrality and the de-escalation that came with it. Sister Barbara fumed at the overwhelming, paperwork-creating stories told within. And Sister Cass simply would not SHUT UP about Sean himself.
- Kyusen1mthCommented"Mysterious you are still young so there is should be any regrets right but the championship of the Indigo Plateau Conference is not that easy to win Not only do you have to challenge 8 gyms and get the gym badge.detailPokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become strongerAnime & Comics · stromerthaha
- Kyusen1mthCommented
Getting trolled by Issei (DxD) maybe some comments made by a certain blue slim turned demon lord(especially if a certain dragon princess was to pass the occasional comment) possibly Jiraiya and/or Tsunade what with there own unique personalities and ideas on romance.
Any suggestions from people who want to see it in Chat? It doesn't have to be waifus, unlike dolls. - Kyusen1mthReplied to ShadowFlux1909
She has Durandal sealed away in a separate space, locked in chains due to the sword being too powerful for her to have out at all times.
Xenovia: It is a pleasure to meet you sister of the crimson Satan my name is xenovia wielder of Holy sword of Destruction -Excalibur Destruction. * Showed the sword wrapped around a cloth* - Kyusen2mthCommented
And on a separate thought, is Rias still engaged to Riser like in canon or did that not happen in this timeline? As I don’t recall reading anything about Rias getting upset about a possible engagement.
At that moment, Grayfia's mother, Greysia, also appeared in the living room and greeted Ken with an affectionate kiss, like a dutiful wife welcoming her husband who had just come home from work. - Kyusen2mthCommented
I’ve just remembered the Ken has his own peerage set, I’m assuming the author has as well🤷♂️ so I’m assuming that Shuri is still only a normal human, so would Ken use a bishop piece on her to help empower her as well as grant her a longer lifespan. And maybe give the other to Kuroka for the power up?
At that moment, Grayfia's mother, Greysia, also appeared in the living room and greeted Ken with an affectionate kiss, like a dutiful wife welcoming her husband who had just come home from work. - Kyusen2mthCommented'Umu, don't be too hasty, take it easy. Ken reminded.
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What happened to the old promise of ‘till death do us part’? And as Shuri did die then technically she isn’t married anymore
Shuri even used the excuse that she was married and still someone else's wife.