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OrdinaOnta2mthCommentedNew reader here, so does this novel has romance in it?
Once they reached the end of the week, Ves and Iris both stepped forward into Velten's office, ready to present their solutions. They walked close together and when they sat down on their chairs, Iris put her hand over Ves' hand, which he readily accepted.- OrdinaOnta2mthCommented
This feels like a comment made from 4ch lol
"I have a neural condition that makes me allergic to almost every kind of mech. My brain just spasms out if I force myself to pilot them! I thought I had to abandon my hobby of piloting mechs, but thankfully I found out about this AMAZING model! Please design more mechs!" - OrdinaOnta2mthCommented
The one's gifted from birth against the preservation of ordinary
His highly intense state of mind even shook Oleg from his routine. The boy looked over at Ves and thought he saw a monster in human skin. - OrdinaOnta2mthCommented
Treat everyone as an enemy first because of it, and then go forward knowing they'll turn instantly the moment they know
If Ves still had his baseline human body, he would have received a hard attack by now. Good graces! Oleg was just eighteen years old, but he already surpassed what Ves had painstakingly built up with the help of the System! - OrdinaOnta6mthCommented
Betrayal arc incoming?
After they disappeared outside of Dalilia's line of sight, she narrowed her eyes with a stern expression, 'He truly had gotten master's eyes. A human receiving such a gift is blasphemous on so many levels.' - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
See what I mean? This is clearly the editor fault, right?
"Is there anything else to eat…?"detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrReplied to BlackPhoenix007
If we, the reader, perceive the scene as the MC, then the entirety of Dwarf language should've been gibberish or at least toddler level english, not just 1 word
"Isâ€"is there any more food?"detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
The Death (Seeking) Dao!
"This is already the third time today." The divine dragon sighed and looked toward the sky. It felt that the locked space of their Garre Holy Mountain had become the playground of these strangers, who could enter on a whim with their powerful spatial abilities. - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Wait, he didn't know about the report? RIP
When he took down the Kingdom of Dwarfs and found out who killed his brother, it would be equivalent to making a great contribution!detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
So it is an advanced world building with magic
The Dwarf Prince narrowed his eyes. It was not light, but a rocket!detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Again, inconsistency
Although the Kingdom of Dwarfs was not large, its population was more than 20 million before they were driven in.detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Really? Editor...
"Isâ€"is there any more food?"detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
What
"Food…"detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Bro the typo 💀
Aching immediately pursed her lips. Persian had made a mess of the ceremony she'd carefully prepared, and he wanted them all to be slaves.detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Didn't know I can get this irritated seeing the word teacher with a capital, but yeah I suppose that's just a title in this world.
"Alright, Teacher."detailBeing Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse MagesFantasy · Loaded Dice - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
They'll use whatever means necessary to turn the tide of the war, so that's not surprising
Jake was shocked by this revelation. From what she had just said, the Oracle Overseer of B842 was well aware of her condition and was keeping a close eye on her. In that case, the Oracle must be having a reason for not eliminating her right away. - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
AIYAIYA
Suddenly, a laser beam of extreme brilliance shot out of Jake's pupils, shining down on the Vampires, and in that instant, for the first time, a sense of immeasurable danger threatened to engulf their minds. - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Paragon sounds interesting af ngl
[Tier 5: Spellcaster, Rune Engraver, Warmage, Elementalist, Clone Slayer, Arcanist, Ruler, Sunlord, Paragon, Chameleon, Ordeal Player, Myrtharian, Myrmidian, Kintharian, Eltarian]. - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
Hoping for Jake to take her as a subordinate, that would be perfect
Admiring his creepy face, Crunch, Melkree and the turkey looked at him with a somewhat uneasy expression, but refused to join in at the risk of spoiling his fun. For Melkree it was also an opportunity to see what this faction leader was capable of. - OrdinaOnta1yrCommented
So that means the Oracle predicted this after Jake saved Ruby and in turn she got a side mission as well to return the favor?
"The Zhorions also died when they opened the door. "Xi confirmed with a grave face. "According to the traces of blood, footprints and fingerprints, as well as the intact condition of this hall, none of them had the time or possibility to resist. Ruby got what she deserved. Indirectly, she has done you a great service, although I doubt that was her intention... "