I feel like you wasted 2 chapters for nothing, like the quest he got was soo fucking useless the condition, the reward all of it just so you could put him in a bead next to ichigo soo fucking useless, and it started good and then you just do this shit with the last 2 chapters just stop it and begging once more, doing shit and making it right is not the way you go to be a better writer ( you do that on a sketch book or something) you **** it up you see that you ****ed it up you STOP, you don't continue so you could **** it up once more, what you do is start again and do it right, this is a copy paste of anime with an extra character who just goes with the flow.