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shit happend when i thought i had free time work fu** in the but for bull** for to end before christmas ffs anyway i'm here now

UPDATE! I'm starting to translate this again. I'm testing multiple AIs to achieve decent-quality translation. The first 5 chapters were experimental. From Chapter 6 onward, I think it starts to become decent. I will update 10 to 20 chapters per day, so expect the novel to be completed soon. My objective is to have a decent translation and be fast with it. Tell me what you think.

You're in the core formation of an army. Would you care about your attributes? your life is at risk, but you're the strongest person there. You also have a divine sense that helps you predict soldiers' attacks. Of course you only care about killing them and nothing else.

Wtf, I just started reading the earlier chapters. Isn’t the main character supposed to be an absolute genius in the dark arts, second to none? He can absorb and resonate with dark energy also, so how the fuck is he still weaker than the Saintess after 100 years? I even thought the author was going to make the system’s tier list completely out of this world, since it says they’re ranked across every reality. That would mean even the strongest beings in the MC’s world would fall short on the list. Please spoil me - I don’t want to waste my time reading something that isn’t worth it.

you should put almost every type, cause if you say any it's over.

The story started great however it became boring really fast. Reading about a character that is already overpowerd traveling with an avatar in the mortal world is not my cup of tea i would like to read a more focus aproach on his cultivation he is a saint but no mention in 60 chapters about his future cultivation. PS : If you read this expecting the novel to have anthing to do with the name of the book your wrong.

No wonder most mc's had a hard life just some litle conflit in a spare of a moment and that's it. blacklisted for life, if they did not have the plot they would be simple erase retards that you read on most novels.

This contains spoilers. It’s about Nalan Yanran from Battle Through the Heavens. The novel is essentially about main characters from different worlds being brought together. They’re given one year to communicate, choose a leader, and share everything they know. Early on, we see many mentions of so-called “bad” characters from certain novels who probably shouldn’t even be in the chat group. Then, the main character goes on a killing spree over the slightest disagreement, and soon everyone in the chat group turns into a mindless killer. When the three-year arrangement arrives, the author makes a logical argument about why Nalan Yanran is a hypocrite for what she did and how she did it. In a sense, that’s true, but she’s still just a kid. Moreover, the mc had already shared the entire plot of all the novels with the group. That means Xiao Yan knew everything that would happen, why it would happen, and even that she would later help him. Despite this, he still chose to let her kill herself. When the elder of her sect tried to intervene, Xiao Yan threatened to wipe out the entire sect for no reason at all. He could have simply killed the elder and demonstrated his power, which would have been more than enough to make everyone submit. Instead, he refused to show his strength yet still expected everyone to obey him, which feels like a typical exaggerated Chinese protagonist move. MC was even concerned that Xiao Yan might not end up slaughtering everyone after Nalan Yanran sacrificed herself to protect her sect. On top of that.

You still don’t get it, so I’ll spell it out: your protagonist is boring his personality is awful and the characters around him are so one-dimensional it’s almost laughable. You’re skimming through your own novel. Why create a plot only to end it after a few chapters?

Your idea is good but flawed, you’re focusing too much on the improvement itself instead of dealing with its consequences. Your main concern should be how the MC controls this surge in power, not how he keeps getting stronger. He isn’t like everyone else, each day he’s twice as powerful as the day before. In no time he could destroy the planet, in less than half a year the galaxy, and soon after that the universe. Making the multiplier ×5 x10 and even x80 only makes the story feel redundant to readers. The rushed plot and sudden interest in the female lead also feel forced. Instead, show how the multiplier changes the protagonist on a fundamental level physically and spiritually, and let the plot revolve around that. Don’t just explain why the family disappears and then making them appear three chapters later. Finally, it seems unrealistic that an entire higher ups suddenly idolizes him. They could grow to revere him, but not to the point where everyone instantly treats him like an ancestor the moment they meet him. Their humans to they will not just bow their heads to someone who they just met no matter the potential they have-