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Kobasica

Kobasica

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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica1yr
    Commented

    I usually don’t say this, but maybe a harem would suit this story best. There are far too many likeable girls here to just choose one, and if Eve actually chose to do one, I would have confidence in him pulling it off. But what do I know. Eve probably has it all planned out.

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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    I don’t think the black question marks are supposed to be there

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    Brink of Dawn
    Fantasy · Chalky
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    Haha! This is great!

    Lifting the flap of her tent, he eyed the few other men laying within as he entered, bandages wrapped around bloody injuries. He saw one with a bloody wrapping over one of his eyes and gave the man a sympathetic thumbs up, but the man lifted his bandage to look at him with both eyes, a deep cut just above his left, and Markus scoffed in betrayal.
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    Brink of Dawn
    Fantasy · Chalky
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    Four shoud be written without a capital letter here, if it doesn’t have another meaning.

    "Come on, Eve is only Four and you're already trying to give me these sorts of headaches. Leave it alone and mind your own career for now."
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    Brink of Dawn
    Fantasy · Chalky
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Replied to Chainslock

    Love the new cover! Though I have one nitpick. The fingers, when gripping something you don’t just do it with the thumb and index finger. 😁

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    Searching for Andromeda
    Fantasy · Chainslock
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    Haha! This is genius.

    "AAAAHHHH! A MAN! A MAN'S HEAD IS TRAPPED INSIDE!" She threw back the quarter at Kairo, who was surprised as well with her over-reaction.
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    The Son of Time and the Olympians
    Fantasy · mssuigeneris
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    Ye Bei was a terrible existence, unable to be understod.*

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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Action · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Kobasica
    Kobasica3yr
    Commented

    This is a bit awkward. Who actually calles the mafia lord a “Mafia Lord”? Mr. Philip would fit much better

    Aster replied, "Yes, the Mafia Lord loves his wife dearly. Her name was a part of all of his legal assets. So, coming to this complex, you can see, it consists of three ten-story apartments. We put two buildings for rent and this one is for your use. Over 17 of them are rented while the rest are empty for now. Here's the list of tenants." Aster, who already made a file with complete details of everyone, gave the Tablet to Will.
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    War Online
    Games · Snowstar
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