china numba one.... - definitely not from the 50 cent army
no no no.... Outcome doesn't scale linearly with effort, it's logarithmic. Double the effort doesn't mean double benefits, only a constant epsilon more than previous. This is mathematically based on utility theory and not something I pulled out of my a**.
this again. isn't this highly suspicious? Trees and shrubs suddenly disappearing around the MC?
nevermind, just saw below
Is this a potential plot hole? What age and status did he see?
they pulled it out of their a**
Everytime I see this line, I imagine that he had already committed the crime....
I feel that the translation is going to be a pain in the ... .
Show, don't tell. This could have been expanded, to let the users know and understand the characters.
Would it be possible to have a round of editing on theses chapters? Here are a few things I noticed from the writing and language that if improved could significantly impact readability. 1. Subject Verb agreement (mainly the aspect of using correct sentence structure/verb for singular/plural subjects, like is/are) 2. Flow. This is a bit subjective, but I kind of agree with the other comment.
the second observer is on the ship
well, if you want to be accurate "time slows down" has a more subtle meaning. When seen from an observer that is far away from the black hole, it will seem that ALL clocks are slowing down as the ship nears the hole, but a person/observer will have an entirely different observation. He will NOT see his clocks slowing down, as to him, all his clocks seem to tick at the "rate" defined by the physics of the clock.
I had the same thought, but I'm willing to let this pass....