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the good old days of my bad ass image of madara shattered at this moment..... (sigh)
at first i thought he does not have prior knowledge on fairytail since he was an orphan much less runaway orphan to boot. while i can understand its hard to make a very consistent background for a self insert mc in a fanfiction, i must say this ever changing background kills the prior interest that one would expect when reading the synopsis. To think a run away orphan still has the pleasure to watch a series of episodes in fairytail to knkw enough about gildarts? isnt it questionable?
earlier was it a typo? 2 chapters ago the ranking list says he's the number 1 player at lvl 21 while alice was no.2 player whose level at lvl 19.
Could have been good if author stayed the same way he has been for the last 290 chapters of this fanfic. Sadly he isn't anymore therefore it's not worth to read the chapters above 290 if your not planning to spend a single money. why? it's because chapters above 290 are way short since author has cut many words of each chapter, you can only view the complete chapters of 291 and above only on his patreon account which you will need to spend real money. I'm not saying that i don't want to support the author or the novel is really bad, its just that my only concern is why would the author post those incomplete chapters in here, and we readers who expect an update would unconditionally open it only to see a chapter that was cut and parts of it are skipped to the point that we don't even know what happened. If this is the case, why would we free readers read these kinds of chapters, we might as well dropped it and find a new one. An example is chapter 294 when mc is teaching orihime about her talent and then all of a sudden, when you scroll down to find what happened, you find him already teaching chad about his powers and did not mentioned that mc has finished teaching orihime. All you will see is periods over and over again starting from chapter 291. It's sad because this work is only a fanfiction, though the story development is quite amazing that it is on par with some original novels out there, but still this is just a fanfic, there is no way this will be an original novel, and profiting from it is not allowed even if the original authors of the said animes that was used in this fanfic does not sue the author for using their own creation for his own profit. I've seen fanfics out there that is more appealing when it comes to story development and world background than this one and even they don't make any profit from it, even if they do they would not do it like this, posting incomplete chapters here in webnovel while posting the complete chapters on his/her own patreon account using this app as an advertising platform. Me rating this fanfic 4.2 is already giving it my respect for the all 290 chapters that I've read on this fanfic and i hope the author won't continue doing this anymore. I know that author has financial issues if he's doing this but the mere fact of him posting incomplete chapters here means he does want to want free readers like us to read his works anymore, For a complete a review: writing quality - 5/5 (story is very well though out and is very understandable) updates - 1/5 ( updates slowly in the past 290 chapters, now its quite fast because chapters above 290 is incomplete, you wont be able to read it anymore since you won't even understand what would happened, core parts are always skipped) story development - 5/5 (very good and well thought out story, it is very interesting on the first 290 chapters, now its not) character design - 5/5 (mc is ruthless to his enemies but very protective on his friends, smart and cunning) world background -5/5 (the anime worlds used are well thought out starting from demon slayer world, to one piece world and to bleach world, plot development can easily be connected since mc gets to train his skills in demon slayer world, trains his spirit/haki on one piece while in bleach he gets to showoff how powerful he is) In conclusion, everything would have been perfect if author didn't decide to post incomplete chapters on this app and advertises his complete work in patreon. He could have just signed a contract with webnovel so that readers could avail privilege membership on this fanfic if he really needs money.
right I changed my mind, last chapter i still want to support this novel but now I'm not sure anymore, the way the chapter is getting shorter and shorter in every update means there is practically no update in the plot of whatsoever. I mean why post a new chapter in here when there is practically nothing to read. Author might as well post these chapters in his patreon for good and not update in here anymore.
and? spiritual what????? I'm confused is this cut short or this is the whole sentence?
counted the last 3 chapters that was updated like today, the first chapter which was chap 292:291 is 586 words or so idk maybe i counted wrong but i could say that its only about 500+ words, for the second chapter that was released which is chapter 293:292 has only 416 words again maybe im wrong but i could say that it has only 400+ words. The last chapter that was released, this chapter 294:293 that im commenting has only 410 words again idk if im wrong but i could wholeheartedly say it has only about 400+ words. In conclusion maybe the author is splitting the 1 whole chapter into 2 or 3 parts as shown from how i counted all the words from the last 3 chapters. The pros in this type of strategy is that there will be constant release of chapters but only short ones hopefully while the cons in this strategy as i've said chapters are way shorter compared to last 2 arcs of this novel. So in other words, if you people still want to read, then pls just enjoy what is released, if not then just drop it and remove it from your library, don't undermine a novel like telling other new readers not to read it just because you people think its short and you won't enjoy it. This is fanfic yes, but its already comparable to some original novels out there released by webnovel when it comes to story development. Again, the author has the shots and we as readers are just there to read their works, nothing else.
this is very nice, the way author introduces new characters to cover the broken plot that was created when hogyoku was stolen from aizen by mc. i'm very much looking forward for the new development that is going to happen and whether ichigo could somehow realize his true identity.
WHAAATTTT? SRY I'M JUST TOO SHOCK WHEN READING THIS STATEMENT, SINCE I COULD NEVER IMAGINED AN ICED BEAM BEING LAUNCHED FROM ANYWHERE BESIDES THE MOUTH OF EVERY POKEMON THAT COULD LEARNED ICE BEAM. BESIDES IT ISN'T COOL TO LOOK AT IF ITS LAUNCHED ANYWHERE BESIDES THE MOUTH FROM MY OPINION.
ohh so this is what happened, im sry to hear that author i hope you and your family get through with it and stay safe we will always wait for you to update more chapters.