thank you for the chapter. however short it might be, it is still a chapter, right?

100+ pretty entertaining chapters yet all ruined in 2 short chapters. that was it.

its not character development. its called rinse and repeat.... well anyway, i am out. thank you for the journey so far. it was entertaining so far yet my disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.

i bet he will become beta now. let nick go and then nick will plan a revenge and then the classic training arc and then defeat him again and the let him go again and then rinse amd repeat..... man.... the next chapter will become the deciding factor whether it will be removed from my library or not....

i always like a story about SCP especially The Foundation. i hope you could finish this as other story always stops halfway..... thank you very much.

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well.... another chapter filled with filler..... i mean chapters.....

why do mc have to explain himself to ouranos? he is an explorer. he explore wether the land is taken or not. at this point, i find it very foolish to do so. making yourself look weak yet strong at the same time. but all it seem is mc being beta AF

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bengyu? maybe Hogyoku? a little editing will be fine bruh. at least get the names right.

thats it? only some measly notes? what a disappointment..... its a shame... i thought this one has some potential..... turns out it just another lesser 2nd grade fanfic.....

please dont get Dumbledore got away easily. and thank you for the chaptee

bruh.... the translation burns my precious and already few brain cells.... i dont know if i could continue....

started really good and interesting. but going down really bad in a couple chapters.

why.... bruh..... why reveals it? in the world of naruto fanfic, or other fanfic, revealing mc's secret is a big NO NO. and that sole reason is why i and maybe many others will drop this. sorry but its the truth.

trans is not a gender. there is only 2 gender. anything else is a mental illness.

then** not than..

if danzo somehow alive, i am dropping it. because too many plot holes already... and if he could live, than the plot armor is thicker than the sun's diameter.

bro. too short...... its even a filler chapter......

its called plot armor.