could have just got him into the storyline at 12, better than just messing around with the storyline, the other characters aren't going to wait for him to grow old to do things they want to :/

this story is just too racist for me to read, some may like it some may not, I belong to the latter part. The mc is too stupid and if not for plot armour, he should have been killed the moment he took out the nano bots.

dropped ?

if ur gonna drop it, just say so :/

-_- dropped

For some reason, I threw up reading this. :|

Random writing ? Doesn't make sense, this whole novel is like reading one big synopsis. From buying Pokemon underground to hating the black market is just lame, dont buy if you dont want them to sell -_- .

So what are you even trying to do ? Any plans or just write whatever comes to your mind ? Either way I'm off b4 this gets dropped

new fanfic ? why not just concentrate on writing one till chapter 50 then divert your attention ?

I've loved the story so far, you don't need harem or romance for a good story, haters gonna hate, you can't change that so might as well ignore them.

yup, the dude would never have become the head of the jedi if he was inclined towards the sith, its like saying obi one decided to become a sith since the council doesn't allow love :/

so is this an original fanfic or copied and pasted from somewhere else ? Either way iits good one 👍

mace windu becoming a sith ? (-_-), good fanfic but this should be enough for me, m out.

dropped ?

itachi click bait :/ m out.

... why put ur thoughts on in brackets .. why not just make it a paragraph comment, it destroys the reading experience Im out

nope, the problem was the story was about a bunch of kids fighting, if you made it into some kind of tournament or something of a bit more ( Actually a lot more ) importance it would have been better.

... R.I.P. ?

the way the mc is getting powered up I doubt this will last long... either way good read so far m off.

this one should be an original novel not an SI. Either way thnks for the recommendation.