Demya_The_Healer

this is good advice.

This is a very different writing style than I am used to reading... but its got me so hooked. Im not even into football.

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

ngl I've been reading his name as Faith up until this point...

basically she's a pot calling a kettle black. calling out zion for wasting time but doing the same. definitely my least favorite of the crew so far.

Reading "enhancement enchantment" confused my brain for a sec.

not anti harem but I am getting tired of it. I'll leave for now then come back later

Honestly I'm a reader that's not overly picky. everyone is complaining about how dumb the mc is but I don't mind. In fact, I rather enjoyed this novel a lot. well enough to get me to a bit over 550 chapters. But the story decisions made at this point are very frustrating to the point that I no longer want to read it. It's not that it's bad but 550 chapters in I'm invested in the mc. the REAL mc. It's not that what you did isn't an interesting idea it's just an extreme let down because it took way too long and lets us get too attached to the real him. if you were gonna do something like that don't give us so much IRL in it. it honestly doesn't even feel like the same story.

tbh they have even stronger physiques than ash. like they survive getting yeeted miles away. xD

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