you can give the reasoning that the other world is limiting his power to lower his power in other worlds

the first and second time you can say it is a accident but after so many times it is more of a methode

welcome back and thanks for all this great chapters and that the whimp is not a wimp anymore. And plsea torture champas brain to nihilum(hell) and back^^

first

an interesting story and a first for me to see that the story is not starting in the shinobi world

BS BS B BS You don't have understand the use of the portkey and the graveyard is not really so big that the plot can advance to this point without that you MC found Harry I like the story but you have really used the easy and false way in this chapter

i like your story really, it is always funny to read.

i like it

welcome back and it is great that you are better

you must really hate xavier and scott

now after you say it i can remember the scene^^

yes this chapter was so fucking funny, i laught always when i think from this chapter. Must reread it new^^

great idea a heat vision but that it can see trought Fidelius is from my point of view utter BS but it is your story. example is Grimmauld Place 12 in the 5th Movie. you see only Number 11 and 13 but 12 is not there so also they have jumped the numbers from 11 to 13 and have forgotten 12. So you can see nothing when you don't see the place^^

thanks for the ending. Better a fast ending then no ending and many of my co commentators are thinking the same. Tanks for the story it was really good and i will read it a second time^^

exp

kick hermine

this malfoy is really interesting

good when you write a note then you can give me an answer to my question. How was charli able to drug Tonks when she becomes the meal direct from the Elfs? a couple chapters bevor you have writen that nemuri has informed tonks of the attempt to drug her and she is only eating in the kitchen

advanced elemental mastery -> intermediat elemental mastery is this not a downgrade?

200 hundred years is 20'000 Years^^ what a nice typo