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No need to specify how he knows. You can imply that it is from his experiences. That part is redundant.
"right now" is grossly redundant. "The man was stunned" is more concise.
You're using "The boy" too many times. It's always a good idea to use "he" or another term to avoid repetition.
It's a bit repetitive to say "his face" here. it is better to just go with "it was set"
its over 9000!
is this thought or speech?
a little too cartoony there. This guy being evil (or a antagonist) is not demonstrated in a believable manner
nicely done