+1

sorry but Lelouch from Code Geass is not a Villain. He was only the enemy from his Dad and last of the world with the secret plot to make the world a better place and he has sacrificed himself for this. So he is not a VILLAIN!!!

what a great chapter

nice story but i think you have nerfed the Fidelius really big. The Fidelius is a cheat spell from gigantic propotion and you have broken the spell easy with a Bombarda. Voldy would have used the bombarda or a Fienfire to destroy Potters home easy, when the Fidelius would be only a bigger and glorifyd invisible spell. Why not use the Ravenclaw library and a Ritual or so to destroy the Fidelius, it would not be ilogical to write that Rowena is the creator of the Fidelius and know how to break it.

i think with a lightning strike so long you can easy burn MAGMABOY^^ burn baby burn

NANI???!!!, it is DxD! then kill Issei and rescue Draig^^

MUHAHAHA i am imune to cliffhangers^^

Jepp this is my VIEWPOINT and i take no offens^^

yes the 1 season and was influenzed a little from other ff with Hestia^^

i like your story very much but i have really a BIG problem with Hestia. She is one from only three virgins under the gods and is 5 MILLION YEARS old. She would never fall so fast for Bell. She is not a seductress or a slut! For Hestia to fall in love with Bell you must take your time, from my viewpoint this is the only chance. How long is he in the familia? Not really long and he have not much interaction with Hestia. She is mostly clinging but innocent

your story is not boring. it is well and good writen and your characters have depth. in this example you have given malfoy a substancial role and not 0815 standart

wish you luck in your exams so that you can top it.

wish you all good