A rare good HP fanfic with heavy AU. It's very AU and the story-line is completely new which brings back the feeling of intrigue of original series, which seasoned HP fan can't feel anymore. It's very slow paced though, 115+ chapter in and the second year is just about to start. It's worth a read, though if I knew it, I would leave this fanfic until it fattens up more.

I feel like One Piece weapon have this ability on default.

Yes I'm also tired of this development and poor marines keep on getting betrayed in fan-fics time and time again. I'm would really love for a FF in which there is MC joining Marines in order to learn techniques and quit but as a result of seeing what pirates are doing, he decides to abandon that plan and stick around instead even if MC has to endure World Government and Celestial Dragon BS. Though this wouldn't be easy to write and I don't have high hopes of finding it.

That's One Piece size and grow in a nutshell... never makes sense. (though my general complain is that all those "stupidly large" enemies we see post timeskip, make the fights look worse then they could when they fight normal sized opponent. I'm not against occasional large enemy... but almost everyone post-time-skip is large.

Very rough translation or rather, it's probably MTL with editor doing little bit of work. Still better than when people don't even bother to correct the names.

I remember reading a bit into One Piece Golden List and now I tried out this one. And well, once again I feel like novel would be 10x times better if Rifan didn't exist and we just had the golden list making a mess of the world with it's rewards and the actual characters being the main focus. Instead once again, it's just a wave after wave of highlights for Rifan and his disciple harem. It's get boring rather quickly and it feels even worse in Naruto world than it did in One Piece.

I read up to chapter 79 because I figured out it was good place to stop... especially since the FF has been dropped for 7 months by now. Which is a big shame since it's rare solid FF with Uchiha OC whose existence doesn't automatically solve all Uchiha issues. Even though the story is dropped abruptly, there is still decent chunk of it so it's worth a read.

Even Uchiha members didn't seem to know about mangekyo in the story much less it being mentioned in anything academy student could access.

MC is about to screw himself by raising the demand and prices for the herb he uses.

Since MC is overpowered enough to copy mangekyo abilities. Shouldn't he be able to copy Obito's Kamui by now. He did run into him earlier.

DUN DUN DUN!!!

Wow, a cool application of Shadow Clone Jutsu I never read before in any fanfic. Then again, most Naruto fanfic OC have a photographic memory and are able to remember everything by reading it once. That regardless whatever they are Uchiha or not.

Very much... though it also has to do with Naruto power-creep issue. In Shippuden as the series progressed the power scaling got more and more insane, completely breaking the original rules and norms. Meanwhile the arc with full puppeteers focus happened early in Shippuden before the power creep. That said, Sasori still looked mad sick. He was literally one-hit KO guy. If it wasn't for Chiyo who managed to heavily counter him, he would really look insanely OP. Even during the war arc power creep, there were just few characters that had capability to fight him.

Yes and the first thing that Hiruzen did after the massacre was to disband the Root. (It still existed unofficially but Danzo could no longer approach normal ninja like Kakashi and invite them over. It was only after Hiruzen died that Danzo started making moves)

I'm 100% certain that Bread Bread Fruit exists.

War of the best was direct result of Ace getting captured. It's not something that can be predicted. Also, it felt like Marines and WG as a whole weren't interested in fighting Whitebeard that much. After all he was already an old man with one foot in the grave. Why spend so much resources on him if they could just wait it out. And it's not like Whitebeard was a vicious pirate that would keep on making troubles. It was all about Ace really.

This is author exposition not MC's thought. MC didn't read anything pass the first book and just knows random bits and pieces since even without reading/watching, it was hard to avoid HP info during it's best times.

So far so good. At the very least the initial start and plot hook are original... which is rare to find after reading bunch of HP fanfics.

I really enjoyed this story originally and it had good run for hundreds of chapters. But at some point the story comes to massive halt, we get 1 chapter of progression and 9 chapters of MC romance with new random girl. What's worse MC isn't a casanova that gets the girls because he wants to but simply typical loser that pretends to be faitful but immediately goes for random new chick as long as he spends more than 3 chapters with her. So yea, all that great world setting and power system and story set ups that we see early in the series are ruined whenever author gets horny and instead of keeping it to himself, he puts it into the novel.

Realistically. If I was in this position and was so invested into the game, I would just ask for a sequel. I mean, it's not like it's a lamp genie asking my this question.