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The problem is that the story is more comedy than story at this point. It reads like whenever something happens, there will be some meme or humorous happening that feels less like comedy and more like short-form content. Like trying to put in a tiktok reel. Again though nobody else seems to be commenting on it.
Is the humor gonna be constant? Because I find myself kind of breathing out chuckles at 'em, but I don't really like 'em. Not sure how others feel about it.
I guess the the enchanted sickle ain't gonna cut it?
Could Gerhard create a mana-powered creator that can create something from nothing like his Create skill but with drawbacks? Like instead of only being able to do that with things two levels below his actual skill level, it can do it three or four levels lower? Maybe additional drawbacks, like it can only do so with materials nearby to copy with (for smaller/inferior designs of the creator machine)… I had other ideas for drawbacks but my mind blanked...
Ultramine? We got Ultra Miners now? Astartes miners anyone?
Sounds like it would swap something like health or status effects, love it.
Sounds like an enchantment a Jester's Sickle will need. What's his weapons name? If it isn't named I would suggest something like Last Laugh or, for insult value, The Giggle. He'll kill you with The Giggle. Or A Giggle. Trying to base the name off of the Minecraft kill messages.