quit trying to force him to be the bigger man, if she was a real friend she would have forgiven him just like the numerous times she forgave Potter. He is allowed to feel upset so quit making him seem like he is crazy and obessesive, its very bias writing

i was wishing for assassin levels, if he is so mysterious it would only make sense for him to be in charge of the spider assassins, just thought it would be a cool "secret"

plz dont turn this into another waste mc who only thinks of helping then does absolutely nothing to change canon

you may get lucky one day, don't give up hope. thanks for update

nah still scummy, but understandable

Thanks for the update, I bet she's his wife, an ex seems too easy a guess for a story like this to me

thx for update, names confusing but still funny

I must be strange if thats the case, since this is my top fav story. thanks for the update

It's a fun story to read, but at some point I think the writer forgot why they started writing this story. The things that are happening later in the story make little to no sense to the mc's self appointed mission. the forced conflicts are getting boring to read because its like the author isn't even trying to hide how lazy it is. The quality of writing has definitely dropped a few levels and I now find this story extremely boring to read. It turned from something funny and original, into a bland copy & paste of every other cultivation story. I recommend reading it but take numerous breaks, or the constant trope repetition will burn you out before you break the first hundred.

so you also have strong emotional opinions about things you have little to no information about? I can see why you struggle. I pointed out the hypocrisy of the hate and your response was "I've been called a racist before so you're wrong"...? I agree the discussion was stupid, also because in the end my points were never answered. It helped waste time tho, so that's a plus I guess. Politics are always messy to talk about, so I can understand where you're coming from there.

The writing quality is good and easy to follow, even if the author doesn't really know where they're going with the story. The mc changes his mind and personality on a whim and its just BSd away because this is fanfiction. there is no world building, the mc isn't even described. If you know nothing about bleach you'll be lost. There are mentions of trees and sand so if you've been to a beach or forest your in luck. If you enjoy a "blood thirsty idiot who thinks he is clever" story, this might be the perfect story for you

he complained about the 11th being full of muscleheads and then he goes and does the same thing? yep, sounds stupid to me. he could train them up like he did the other 3, especially since his numbers are small. I thought I was reading a story about a smart mc, my mistake

but they're either sick or lazy, which means someone has to pick up the slack, If he thought that way i would understand

all this for 2yrs of house arrest?

as soon as I read those first eleven words I stopped

do you're characters actually think/have a personality or just say and do whats needed to push the plot?

yep, still ungrateful...but happy adoption day🎉

second time he mentions it, I think he cares

more like "nothing to see here" instead of "nothing was ever here", think jedi..or penguins

ofcourse it does