thx. interesting idea how some organic sludge transform other biological organisms into mechanical one... with the help of mechsnical tentacles. Is the system controling the proces or playing with it... on a sludge (and crystal) high?
The later the chapter the more difficult to read. Some reediting is needed. In one sentence it mention actions of 3 characters and no use of comas. You can only guess who is doing what (forget about guessing why they are doing it)