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It is with the same name as this fanfic, look for it on the platform fanfiction. com

No del todo xD

hishigami enbi, hishigami mai (intelli village no zashiki-warashi)

1ro?

You know, ironically I was hoping they were inspired by the Saber Proto fanfic, but not in this way ... But hey, I like it, take your 5 stars and my power stones.

and the puppet?

It's a pretty good novel, it hurts that it has very bad grammar, leaving that aside, I don't know why to put too many OCC or Characters from other random animes already having enough of the canon (So far it has put Ino from Naruto and Celty from Shield Hero), besides that the MC to exclaim the beauty of someone every chance he gets.

Mankitsu happening

That is where all my expectations have gone, it only remains to wait to see if the author is encouraged to re-upload it because I saw that he closed all his novels.

Nasuverse?

I agree, I was already watching the 3rd season of the anime and I never expected to find this gem here.

That depends, if it is Excalibur Proto, that weapon is almost at the same level as Rhongomyniad, but you have reason to say that Excalibur would not be the best weapon to take to Marvel, if it were EA or another weapon that can even hurt celestials it would be what Better yet, the weapons in DCU are a great example.

+1

Who will be your love interest? Lumine?

Link of forum question?

Mc x rin x Altria(artoria) ? Even if that, your story is quite interesting, I will leave you my stones, I hope you can continue with this story.

I do not know if you read this comment but here I leave vital information about the universe of "Fate / Stay Night" (since you saw Zero, I will not mention it or its shared universes). 1st - Fate / Stay Night has 3 routes, depending on which girl you choose the plot will change (route Fate-Altria, Ruta-Rin Rhine and Heavens Feel-Sakura), which are already available if you want to see them. 2nd - Vital information about the War of the Holy Grail: Illyassel von Einzbern has a minor grail in his heart (if you saw UBW you will have seen it), Sakura Matou (Tohsaka) also has a minor grail that was picked up in Fate Zero and inplanted in her heart by her grandfather Zouken Matou (Zolgen Makiri), Unlike the Greater Grail that Illya possesses, this is corrupted and if it is unleashed, the death of the world occasionally. 3rd - The Greater Grail, unlike the minor is within a cave, which is located at the Ryudou Temple (which you can see if you saw Fate Stay Night - Ruta de Altria). 4th-gilgamesh the most powerful hero, but the pride of him is so great that he unless someone worthy, will never use his power (if you saw Fate Zero you can see your power out while in Fate Ubw I end up losing because she contempt Shiro) 5th-Beserker / Heracles is an indomitable hero due to the almost indestructible physician of him, the Noble Phanthasm of him can only be crossed by Heroic B-A ++ weapons, which after dying creates an immunity. 6th - There are 7 teachers who were chosen by the Gria, but in the anime normally it is not shown so here I will put them: Shiro Emiya - Artoria / Altria Pendragon - Knowledge Bazett Fraga McRemmitz - Cu Chulainn - Lancer Rhine Tohsaka - Hero Emiya - Archer (Shiro Emiya after making a contract with Alaya) Atrum Galliasta-Medea-Caster (which betrays and converts Souichirou Kuzuki into the new Master of Him) Sakura Matou (Tohsaka) - Medusa - Rider (Shinji Matou is a temporary teacher and not the real) Illyasbel von Einzbern - Heracles - Beserker Zouken Matou (Zolgen Makiri) - Hassan of the Cursed Arm - TRUE ASSASSIN Medea - Sasaski Kojiro - Fake Assassin These would be all the Servant, in case of 2 Assassin, one is invoked by a Servant while the other by the true Master of Him. Well that would be all, basic information so you can use if you want it, remember that it is also the wiki if you want to consult any information of what you mention.

Link?

While normaly i cant be bothered writing negative reviews however for this story i will make a exception since i realy like the anime and novels used in this fanfic but absolutely HATE everything else so this is just for a small hope that maby the author will give the MC significant character development(have him possesed by a ghost and completely wipe his personality or something similiar) and at the same time to vent my frustrations with what would otherwise be a good story in my eyes. Now, the story started off great, a very interesting idea, great worlds, great characters and the mc felt his crisis of being killed in the near future so it would make for a great plot reason to become stronger. But... the MCs personality is absolutely the worst ive seen in recent times in the more populiar stories on webnovel. The MC can be summed up as a chinese Issei Hyoudou for those who have seen/read Highschool DXD, meaning that while he is not some kind of "hero of justice" type hes extremely stupid and completely loses his mind whenever he sees anything female. The MCs behaviour is extremely disgusting and reading about his actions and inner toughts is basicly a carbon coppy of Issei wich should make anyone puke but somehow all the girls simply fall in love with him on the spot for no reason at all while the MC only gets more and more perverted but doesnt dare to take that last step. Then we have the MCs extreme unlogical greed for money, i mean hes part of the richest family in the country but instead of strenghtening himself with the chat group he only cares about selling things for gold, i mean seriously, hes in a bloody cultivation world where gold is worth completely nothing and everythign is all about treasures artifacts weapons skills and medicines etc, but instead of using those kind of things to make himself stronger he only sells them for gold he simply doesnt need at all. Now the most frustrating part of the MC is that after he got rank 9 and stopped feeling the threat of death from the plot the mc simply gave up all ambitions of becomming stronger, he already didnt care about anything but raw cultivation base before this but after he simply didnt care about anything but chasing his own perversions. He has countless of points to buy supreme skills weapons or medicine to improve his cultivation but he simply doesnt care, almost every chapter the MC says things like "oh if only i had a skill i could do this" or "oh i dont have any skill so im actualy a fake expert with much lower combat power than someone at the same level" or "oh my spear is only a ordinary spear so it breaks too easy"... wich could literaly be solved by a click of a button in the chat group store or by simply getting a skill from one of the worlds he has access to but he just completely ignores it instead prefers to sell those things for gold only wich he doesnt use. Even worse is that he actualy got a powerful technique from killing a enemy called banishing shift, wich is the golden finger of the MC in that world, but because he doesnt understand it instantly he simply pretends it doesnt exist and ignores it instead of training like everybody else... The worst of the story is that the Author is obviously trying his best to write this story, the ideas are great, the writing quality is excelent and the updates are constant. So it is extremely obvious that the MC acts like that because the Author wants him to and not because the Author doesnt know how to write or anything like that. I just cant fathom why you would write such a obnoxious japanese beta MC and also constantly make him out to have a negative IQ by repeating those things i wrote above...