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Ortrox

Ortrox

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A nice enough guy

2018-04-16 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1d
    Replied to Exi_Nexi

    he put the kunai to form the hand seals

    The thrown kunai divided into three, three into nine, and nine into a dense rain of needles, attacking like a swarm of bees, overwhelmingly pressing towards Killer Bee.
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox4d
    Commented

    it seems kyomu's inner gate is inspired by killua

    Ch 129 Chapter 129
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    I hope you get better.

    Ch 46 The Attack I
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to Dracule_Alucard

    It must be because WG changed Gol D to Gold

    Scopper Gaban!
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    One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning
    Anime & Comics · DaoistAutumn_rain
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    Well I tried to keep reading, but it seems to have no progress. He has so many powers that even if they are progressing we don't see it. Not to mention that the plot is all over the place

    Ch 19 Chapter 15
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    A New Sun (Highschool DxD Shinto Demigod SI-OC)
    Anime & Comics · Karmic_Wizard
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    A riolu and a kubfu?

    The white cub began working with Xander and Fenris as it used [Scratch] whenever Fenris was taking a break from using [Ember].
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    Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
    Anime & Comics · BoredAsura
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to 0Eitan0

    It's probably her that wants to make the anime

    Ch 7 Miki #4 [R-18]
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    Champion of the Netori Goddess
    Anime & Comics · Mahou_Shonen
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    Why he didn'make the ball appear besides the pirates? since his powers are space based they shouldn't need to travel

    Ch 5 First Battle
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    One Piece: Building a Crew of Sexy Wives
    Anime & Comics · coldyp
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to DaoistleEOSH

    shikamaru

    Danzo's laziness in that battle could be compared to a certain pineapple-headed character later down the timeline. Whether it was Kunai vs. Susano, Izanagi as the Body Replacement Technique, forgetting to use Kotoamatsukami or sealing the bridge with his death, it all seemed like a farce.
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    Hatake Tatsuya in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to WebReaderPub

    because it's what happens to cannon fodders

    Due to this incident, Tsunade, Nawaki's sister and somewhat of a Brocon, broke up with Tatsuya.
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    Hatake Tatsuya in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to ALEX1402

    Ty

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to ALEX1402

    You remember the name? Would like to read this, kkkkkkkk.

    Ch 77 Chapter 77
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    the ball of chackra that neji saw above naruto's stomach was the Kyuubi.

    'Neji saw it pretty clearly in his fight with Naruto right, the chakra originated from the the spot above the abdomen. I was half expecting the stomach to be the source but as I traced my chakra network it was pretty clear that the heart was responsible for creating chakra, though it is indeed stored somewhere in my abdomen.'
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    Naruto: Ero World
    Anime & Comics · carrick_iv90764
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to Rafael_Lopez_Villa

    no, until the passive refreshes

    [Sleeping Unexpected Gain: Body recovery speed doubled]
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    I don't mind slice of life if it's well done, who btw you are doing good

    Ch 39 How to bathe
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to thesacredmenace

    yeah, it's perfect.

    "It was a normal romance, up until near the end of the book. A man and a woman who liked each other. They had many intimate encounters. And I felt that both were meant to each other. But... Damn HentaiGodZ."
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Commented

    Hahahaha, nice one with that mention, I hate that guy

    Ch 36 Not again
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox1mth
    Replied to Yuuki123

    It was a trap, he wasn't injured

    Ch 67 Chapter 67
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox2mth
    Commented

    I think you should save some of the extra chaps, in my opinion a writter block is inevitable, a buffer for it would be good and sometimes it's good to take a break

    Ch 28 A Tale of a Gutsy Ninja
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • Ortrox
    Ortrox2mth
    Commented

    Have a good recovery

    Ch 11 Chapter XI: Hidden Story
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    Naruto: Blood & Pleasure
    Anime & Comics · NexusPrimodius
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