a few more words for a victory lap would have been nice, but the main points were covered. Black Fiend Hall disbanding is probably the biggest thing in this chapter

trying to provide half the gifts when he's become ten times as important... just foolish

there lith goes again, deciding the value of a woman by how hard they get him

spoken like someone who's never put salt on a vegetable and eaten more than a couple servings

why is he perving on his mother it's so creepy and weird to give this much physical description and bring up all these irrelevant details