Adandi
Only god can judge you, but most y’all stories got me disappointed
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did I miss something? isn't he a deviant?
The two friends that know he doesn’t need to eat
She really twisted his arm there 😕
Enjoy the story. Gonna skip the chapter though, not here for that kinda stuff. Esp with children.
They won’t be wrong. He’s pretty negligent for someone actively trying to hide his identity.
😕 why not wake her up like a normal person would
Currently at chap 62. Is this a black superman in marvel story or a black guy with kryptoninan capabilities in marvel story? It’s feeling like the former at this point and I’m not too excited about that. Good story so far regardless. MC is funny sometimes but annoyingly lacks awareness at this point in the story. Hopefully he grows out of that later on and starts using his “genius level intellect”. I’ll read to catch up, then continue until the chapters stop coming. For the culture
Hal
It gets corny having someone constantly talk about how great they are and how great their creations are, regardless if it’s true or not. Maybe do more POV, we already know he’s OP. We can get others coming to that realization. Or even doubt his existence for him to show up and shatter their plans… maybe not even him, people he’s “guided” along the way.. Just a thought
Who has a lit fireplace in California 🫠if they have a fireplace at all
I just got it… he’s Arthur Pendragon
Unless my calculations are off, he became E- rank before he even started training with his teacher and trained with her for a couple months.. only his skills went up?.. just curious how he’s still E- when his main goal was to train for that time
Haha
Lol like what?
Just started reading like a couple days ago.. already one of my favourite Fanfic ... The main character is already OP so maybe make it more plot driving and less focus on power grind. For instance, Make him seem strong but not as strong as he really is, So people dont think its impossible to beat him. Build the side characters, people like gin (people plotting to take him down) and maybe people loyal to him too, but he’s heartless, doesnt really care regardless ... Even give him some fake “noble cause” or something .. like in the naruto world, he wants to collect all the tailed beast for ultimate power so people start trying to prevent him from doing it ... in the end this Is all a Game to him and he beats them when they think theyve won ... i really like villain, hope you continue
Wife still goes along.. only difference is he apologizes
Is It me or does this sound like rape?...
This man basically just told a princess of wakanda that he knows about wakanda ...