Leonholdt

I...don't think whoever is writing this understands any form of human interaction. even as a work of fiction, where you expect some sillyness and plot armor, more so on a site like this where quality is...we are all happy with sub-par work 9/10 times. But this just shows a blatant disregard for actual storytelling. I'd say I was upset or angry, but that would imply they hooked me into the story for anything other than a novel concept told a 5th different way. I also believe it to be A.I generated, of course. Off to drop that review of 1 star.

staring to think it's some A.I writing based off piss poor descriptions with no proper checking.

ah, the good ol' forced plot that makes no sense and is expected to just be ignored. this shows the fiction has no weight or real depth to it. time to turn the brain off and read till this goes premium, then drop.

logic and continuity are never things to expect in these sorts of novels. 1 - it is almost always machine translated, which loses a lot of context and "feel" 2 - The person doing this is either a bot or some guy/girl that found the original and just went bonkers posting it here with minimal, if any, editing. likely without the authors knowledge. 3 - it's easy free money for no work or creativity on their part. turn the brain off and pretend. or stop reading. lol

The level of forced idiocy.

kinda typical asshole behavior from an MC that needs translation. of course the author will dedicate 5-6 chapters to purely "show" how the MC is always on the moral highground and taking that money was just, and right. typical brain dead fiction ya stop reading once it needs pay.

Not the actual author anyway, obviously. taken from some site that already has been translating it and put it here, i bet. typical web novel stuff. I bet quality drops drastically around chap 50 cause the people doin the work stopped when their hard effort was stolen

probably. seems the same level of intelligence as the author/translater.

huh, guess the baron is doing it while Max there stays at home with his 8 men. this just had to be the paragraph I jumped to. Edit or at least go over your work once or twice. good giddy lord

so much incoherent bumbling in a story building attempt. this will have to be a no-brainer read and paragraph skipping since so much appears redundant.