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Especially since it's a reporter. I don't care who his/her parents are, if they're working a job as a reporter, then their parents are not that high up the chain.
Usually, I'd save my comments for the latter chapters, but I suppose there's an exception to everything. I was initially very excited to see a crossover with Mihawk as the main character, but there's too much of other stuff added, "Door Door Fruit"? An inventory dimension, and still two additional future swords to come? Like, the reason Mihawk is so liked by the fanbase is because he's an awesome character, but also because he's very "pure" as a Swordsman. He has his one sword, a dagger necklace and all else is pure skill. He didn't need any supernatural devil fruits to claw his way to the top. And I can see that his strength is currently limited to "Super Soldier" too, and yet somehow still ranked as 13th strongest? Too many additions, limitations, and what not, kinda doused my excitement for this.
That moment when you feel like the slightest miss-step might end up with you in a lifetime of debt xD
She might not, she might. Sometimes it's worth trying a new experience as long as you're not too set against it (if you're too set against something and do it anyway, it'll bias you into disliking it from the get-go).
Do they not get paid dividends? With an investment as large as 10mill$, depending on the % of the dividend payout and the growth of the company, they'd get paid more than a quarter million annually I think?
Realistically that makes sense, of course, by that same metric, it gets more and more impossible as time goes on. Eventually, you have a family or other people you care about and you put THEM in danger by going out dishing out vigilante justice. At a certain point, the morality greys out, is the good done by helping strangers worth the risk you're putting your loved ones through? Is that still moral? Or is it just plain irresponsible?
Really? I would love to be reminded of when that happened. Cuz if I remember correctly the last time they ate someone was when Drake sent mercenaries after them to bring them in as experimental subjects... Can't imagine how that's worse than mugging an entirely unrelated person. Of course, I could be missing something, refresh my mind if that's so. If anything I'm pretty sure Prime has been going out of his way to not kill people after they were done with Drake, so as to not burden Sara with any undue guilt.
roll with it...
hogyoku grimmjow! looks awesome too.
okay, I'm sure now. At first, I thought maybe the author didn't have a link of knowledge about romance, but that's not what's happening here. I'm pretty sure the author is going the Yandere route on purpose.
Yeah, everyone tries to put their best foot forward and try to portray their best SELF to impress a girl. But the MC isn't doing that, he's effectively lying about his entire personality, all the while he's manipulating Jinah by using privileged information. This ONLY works because this is fiction and as such is entirely controlled by the author. If there was even a tiny bit of realism, once they got even a little bit more serious, the entire facade would eventually crumble, because he can't keep lying about who he is, and if by some miracle he managed, it'd be miserable. Because then the person she loves isn't even who he is.
I thought it was a roundabout insult xD
Plus Whitebeard is way too old, there's no way he got to where he was without overusing his Haki many times. Not only was he old as hell, but sick as hell xD
She said "husband", considering that generally takes legal papers, it would be a bit difficult for his father to be that person. He'd be married twice, and somehow juggling not only his apparently very busy job but also two marriages. Though the fact that we didn't get much detail makes me think there's something fishy going on, it seems unlikely that it's just some random character that will disappear in two chapters.
I look forward to the new horizons!
Nope, Yugioh is VERY specific with its wording for effects. Tributing is not the same as targeting. For example, you can't target Obelisk with Spell, Trap, or Monster effects. But you can still use something like Lava Golem to tribute it. Look up "targeting" and "tribute" if you don't believe me. But yeah, Yugioh is insanely specific with its wording.
Maybe try using Grammarly or something to reduce the amount of spelling/grammar errors. It's a bit obvious that English isn't your primary language, but there are things that can help with that. The story is interesting, but it would shine more with better technical writing.
If he kept going to the same dungeon depth you mean? Ehh, yes and no. He'd get used to the monster patterns, so he definitely would need more variety even if he stayed at the same stats. Kinda like fighting the same BOSS over and over again in some games, after the patterns are memorized, you can solo it with no equipment with ease xD
Author, do you think that maybe you're too dedicated to the canon timeline? Brave the revolution! Smash the repeated tropes! Embrace your inner desires and rush us forward into the unknown!
Because it was fun. That's literally why he was doing it xD