greencross

Literally in one part of this chapter Xiao Rou tells Dugu Bo to his face that he is a soul beast hahaha, in the part where he talks about the tiger

or is it a translation from Chinese, or she really likes cultivation stories, because only in those types of novels have I seen these elements, the commitment that the woman hates for the mc is weak, that everyone except her group are enemies, the spirit style, in cultivation novels they always talk about the spirit, apart from that they are out of everyone's role, that Shuzune says that she must get rid of the baby? that is not right, she would never say something like that and more so that Tsunde puts herself in such a weak role

Good thing you found it, Danzo only ruins the talented.

Continuity errors, and many other errors, I will stop reading it until it is rewritten properly.

who the fuck is belemub

it was time

and they arrived at the stardou forest, don't give me that bullshit that they're going to find the yinyang well

The story has potential, but it needs a lot of editing to make it more readable.

His lack of strength is his own fault, he doesn't try to improve in Taijutsu to open the fighting gacha, and he doesn't practice any other style to open new gachas, the ground or electric type would have suited him well, and well he also has bad luck, in the Norma type he hasn't gotten extreme speed, that would help a lot

There are several points that I don't like 1. Why if he has the essence of the archmage and the alchemist, he doesn't get cured? At no point is it said that it is a curse from some god 2. What's happening with his attitude, is it affecting his essences or what? That thing about letting the world burn is going to seem like his famous phrase with so many times he says it