Are you translating this novel?It kinda feels off,you are writing magic chains where it should be magic circuits,denial of non existence should be denial of nothingness and in general the writing,dialouge and the flow of the story feels off. It feels like someone is using google translation to translate a document and then manually editing it.

This is great guys,read it.It's almost professional quality writing,slow paced,detailed characterization and world building. A young elf from some franchise self inserted into a modern 37 year old russian man who is alcoholic,dirt poor,lives near a tundra forest in the middle of nowhere where the nearest hospital is 80km away.He knee is busted due to a prior accident,his liver and heart is not in good condition due to excessive drinking. This is the condition the elf found himself in,he is cut off from his magic and thus longivity,he only has around 40 years to remedy his situation. Guys,seriously read it,you will see the elf trying to improve his life from day to day,using his elven skill to earn money by gathering bounties from the forest,extracting life force from trees to mend his body and trying to get acess to his magic again. 5 out of 5 star for me.Don't expect instant gratification,power creep and pokemon harem though. A question for the author please,what is this about mass effect and dragon age?Is he a dragon age elf now in mass effect universe or will he visit those dimensions later?

Really,where did the Benedict Clark part of his soul go?Did it said just f u c k it,I am gonna be doormat for the Snape part so I can watch how snape part destroys my life again?

Plus MC is super simp over Lily,new mc is benedict +snape but he is still simping over Lily. MC really needs to get a life,he has future knowledge,perhaps complete his potion mastary earlier,get a dada mastary ,whatever man,I don't know just stop simping.There is life outside of that,hell if needs be,leave wizarding UK and go to MACUSA. But all we get simping snape who is willing to die for Lily......WHAT???No really WUT?

So,...super simp benedict snape?

Two chapters in,where is the story at; man?

型月希腊，我真不想成为英雄啊！ Google it. Don't know if it is okay to share links here,just copy the text above in google and hit search.

Dude.....in the summary the translator clearly state that it is in no way related to nasuverse or type moon.... The title and picture are from original chinese author and click baits. It is a slice of life set in ancient greece as witnessed by a modern chinese man. Expect lots of chinese cliches-giving faces,face slapping,senior borther junier sister,mount tai,secluded ancestor etc. It's written by a chinese for a chinese reader,otherwise you may find it very jarring and disturbing as how Jason and Heracles talk about senior brother and junior brother. I read the raw a bit,didn't like it,the cultural clash was very strong,it was weird to read how ancient greeks were behaving like typical fantasy xianxia cultivators.

.....but he clearly stated in summary that he has twub's permission.

Man,dependes on what you want.If you want to turn in patreon,yeah some rewrite and or editing is a good idea but if you are writing sololy for fun or to improve then I say continue on . Good bashing though,hope you won't needlessly drag it on later as those stories get boring.

Take a break man,it feels like you are burned. When the story first came out the idea was great,ME had detail writings of his power ups,now though? No details of anything,feels extreamly rushed,I loved his first armor designing with the quarian kid back in Omega,now nothing like that happens. It's also getting repetative.