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Angela?

I see six digit numbers as sauce of power

I honestly think the direction you are going with the fanfic is fine, as for writing style stick with what you got it's great and if you can get more improvement the better you are

First

wanna say title matches though without the porno aspects.

true meaning

an here I am thinking wth is going on?

1st?

My Life as Tadano - Webnovel

I meant solo leveling, can't get those shadow soldiers out my head they're freaking awesome.

bunch of evil people you are. why not shoot father, father goes to hospital and kids go there as well since mother is already there.

Prospective Wife Rescue

oomph!

I can't give any power stones😭

where?

good read. have a speedy recovery

recovery should be first priority