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Without a doubt one of the greatest avatar crossover fanfic I have read. At no point did I ever not think this character was Tai Lung or anyone from the avatar side, a perfect mix. This author writes a well thought out 5 star story everytime.

No Idea why we keep getting the same information over and over ever chapter. How many more chapters is Kakashi gonna be surprised about the Chakra and the fact the he is learning fast?

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Started off really good but now.....its 90% unnecessary monologue, then 10% of actually story. At some point just change to the name to 'The Seal-master who made Hinata and Ino Strong, and forgot about himself'

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So much great monologuing, not a lot of story happening these last few chapters.

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