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Seriously, I think this is the second or third comment I have received about the MC’s intelligence. I will try to improve it, making him more normal. In my mind, however, it made sense, because even though he has watched the series, there is no way he could remember 100% of the memories of more than one past life from over ten years ago. Anyway, thank you for the comment.

I’m not sure what you meant by that. I don’t like writing characters who try to solve everything right away or think they know everything.

Could you tell me which part? I like understanding the reader’s perspective on the story.

Obrigado pela review, ainda não decidi sobre o interesse amoroso se vai ter ou quem vai ser, mais quem sabe, estou escrevendo a história com calma e aos poucos também estou revendo a série para poder escrever melhor os capítulos.

I saw a comment on Chapter 4 that Storm2023 made, and it gave me some ideas I hadn’t thought about before. But you can be sure it won’t be the same as Scott’s.

Maybe I haven’t thought of a love interest for him yet.

Seriously, I’ll take a look—maybe I repeated it by accident. I was trying to show the development of Scott’s abilities.

He didn’t think it could end up causing Daniel’s permanent death, which is why he didn’t intervene directly. He also knew that an attack like that would force Daniel’s lineage to activate.

They’re already more or less on the same level as an Alpha—maybe even stronger, I’d say, somewhere between a normal Alpha and a True Alpha. Since they’re a combination of two species, you end up seeing some similar traits between them.

Well, you have to take the whole situation into account—he was scared, so he wasn’t really thinking clearly at that moment. But thankfully, in the end they didn’t focus on it that much.