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actually binged 700+ chapters in just over 4 days ... very nice writing and awesome story ... Also wouldn't Jake be good as a catcher ? as he can see other batters shortcomings ,wouldn't he be able to direct the pitcher to throw pitches that would make the batter struggle ... also keep up the good work
This I think is a nice situation to escape, get wounded and fake death due to infection or something, while her mother can claim she was poisoned by the first daughter/son or something because she ate her brother's food/medicine when he was "recovering"
Finally some people with brains ... in almost all the transmigrator/regressor MC novels I have read so far people surrounding MC think the sudden behavioural changes are no big deal especially the antagonists ... but now people actually suspect something and show appropriate caution
I really like this style of revealing the "original" plot bit by bit rather than the usual way where most of the things are already revealed in the first few chapters ... can't wait to see how the original plot described our MC's situation ... also I wonder if MC will ever find out about the transmigration stuff and question her reality
Oh boy the reincarnator messed up big time ... this was the wrong way to mess with MC ... not really sure how much she knows about MC's circumstances but pretty sure MC helping her brother would be a key detail so all you need to some how switch MC's notes with a fake one that will make the brother fail and then naturally the brother and the mother will punish her ... or even better invite a bunch of high standing female secretly and intrude on their sparring session cause I the females who know martial arts are looked upon in positive light and pretty sure it would be even worse for the brother
I really hope she develops a bit more self confidence/ self reliance ... given her wits and martial arts prowess she could easily fake her death and escape from her prison, and she could easily crossdress and become her uncle's adopted son and live a more fulfilling life. But I guess then it will become similar to your first novel I guess