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Great story! Would like more regular postings, but so far so good. I like how the character has set backs rather than just powering through everything with "the force" as a crutch for the plot. I also like the minor harem route. I was afraid that this was going to become another overly sensitive romantic drama for a little bit. But you avoided that without using the protagonist's plot armor or talk-no-jutsu. So applause all around.
Yeah but ragnarok isn't for another 2000 years or so, if I have my time scale right. Also, that would essentially mean the MC will have to stay in time out in Niflheim for however long Odin pleases while Odin has all the time in the world to lie to everyone about what a horrible monster the MC has become.
Just trying to drown out the haters. Good smut chapters, and a solid plotline. I actually appreciate the harem theme in this one because it isn't the usual wish-fulfillment/self-serving type cliche that appears so often in other novels. Here the harem is plot driven and makes sense in context, rather than some despicable manipulation power of the protagonist.
How about a rain rain fruit or some other minor weather power. Not a true logia, but a unique paramecia or something that synergizes with the whole "skyship" theme for shiki's crew. Or something for comic relief like a sheep zoan fruit to make an Ares type character from Fairy Tail.
Perfect Finish! And please do continue with this possible marriage with smoothie. I liked her character from cannon and always thought she along with a few other of Big Mom's children deserved more "screen time" instead of just being mentioned to increase the size and power of Big Mom's Family
Okay what's with all the self-recrimination and loathing. Maybe in our society a love potion or whatever would be viewed as rape, but remember you are writing about an entirely different culture. In an immortal world where everyone is long lived, there is no concept of monogamy because having the same partner and no one else for hundreds of years is just impractical. People change too rapidly to make some romanticized "forever-after" actually work for such long periods of time. And human type gods that are not infallible are subject to the same rules. This rehashing of "to rape or not" is stupid since there are no real boundaries for *** in such a free-love society. There is no horror for imbibing too much, passing out, and finding you slept with a stranger. So what's the difference between that and getting "potioned"? Any argument you would make only applies to human values not god ones...
What is Anniquiized? Not even the mighty Google has answers. Truly amazing lol...
Pretty good for a Smut chapter. I was a little disappointed that Harry was tricked so easily. I mean he is supposed to be a conniving underdog character who is acting as a power in the shadows. So it seems counter-intuitive for him to be surprised so easily.
Love this story! There are just to many fanfics about Dark Naruto or Naruto replacements, but not enough fics about new characters that interact with the story characters in a meaningful way. The pre-cast time setting is also interesting since there is less of a need to be true to the plot of Naruto. Please write faster Author sama, cause I can't get enough ;D.