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demonz2yrCommentedIs this chap about why he cant let him die?
If he really just let Uncle Ben die here, he would be guilty all his life.- demonz2yrCommented
Villains can kill other villains. Dont like all this waiting when even I could see he would be trash hero before it started.
The moment where Alex has to decide his path! - demonz2yrCommented
It dont seem like it atm.
'Do I have a smart brain too now?' - demonz2yrCommented
Or u could do something that almost all devils dont do. Train the body! Na body not needed who train that.
"You could but that would be too slow, plus it's a good opportunity to learn and control the traits." - demonz2yrCommented
Well in a way you reincarnated in hell/underworld.
Going to Heaven or Hell was what I mostly expected but, Reincarnation was not what I thought would happen when I died, but it wasn't completely unexpected. - demonz2yrCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7.Abduction: Interlude
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Hes op? I mean strong but he runs out of Chakra fast. Eyes are op but not op same time.
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It be better with a pic.
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Kinda was hoping for aliytle more back then chaps. Like when they turned or when they got stabed by the hunters. those are the small ones i wanted to see the main on is when Mikael would do to him when he finds out he not his son. A lot of ppl make Mikael a bad guy but he wasn’t. He just didnt want to lose another child. Thats why he wanted them stronger.
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Dont get how this will will show a family where other one didint. Same test same goblins but diff countrie. cant see it. I think they could of found out it from first test.
I walked into a the blood inheritance testing room and saw the familiar machine that was also present in the Britain's Got - ahem, Britain's gringotts. - demonz2yrCommented
Srry but evryone a pervert unless there air heads or to pure. There just diff lvls of perverts.
He's the kind of guy who saw only saw any girl sexually in his sixth year. In short, he's not a pervert. - demonz2yrCommented
Becouse u used a wand first it should be 10x harder. it better to start wandless.
I now have something like obsession with it, And the fact that I have found some very important uses for it only contributes more to it. - demonz2yrReplied to funmaxwell
I think they can find a area where it was used. They put a tracking devise so they know what the spells they are doing and really is doing it.
'So....it wasn't a dream.' I thought to myself. - demonz2yrCommented
It should be easyer to learn wandless before useing a wand. Ppl have hard time going wand to wandless becouse they use to the help.
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Should be upgraded demonic power. Nerf means weaking it.
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I thought he knew where he was reincarnated to? Is he going to stay with x-men? I know they good guys but i dont like how they handle stuff.
''Oh, your awake now, I know you may be confused but-' 'Who the heck are you! and why the hell are you... blue?' I said in slight panic and shock - demonz2yrCommented
What being stupid? I dont want that POV.
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In a way u can say he lied. he said he only make her suffer for a month but it been a year. It was his fault in first place. He seems smart but he does not no anything about animals.
He narrowed his eyes. "I want to hear your explanation of your actions in that incident that happened a year ago." - demonz2yrCommented
Lol u stop reading witch novel books becouse they get it wrong. Then go to twilight for the vampires. They dont count at vampires to me lol.
At the age of seventeen, I discovered twilight and fell in love with the story or elements of the story vampires were something new. I had gotten bored of witches and magic as many of them get it wrong, or at least compared to my magic, there were no rituals or anything like that. So vampires and shapeshifters and werewolves had gotten my attention, and I wondered if they were real in this world as well. - demonz2yrCommented
I think spider would be cool! Use web then have lightning in it. spider be good spys becouse they can be really small. Might have some kinda eye skill becouse they got 8 eyes. Rest seem plane to me. eagles prob good with wind and can fly you places thats it. Gorilla to me is just 3rds pet only becouse its close to monkeys lol. lion or tigers prob only good for attacking. sage mode might give you cat ears and tail!! Lol i wish
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