Roman123

There are a lot of stupid moments here 😁 I can't imagine how an ancient-style oriental novel can be read with modern weapons, martial arts, immortality, and a harem.

Indeed, at first it seems interesting, but then you realize that the further you go, the worse and worse it gets, a complete imbalance of forces, like the apocalypse has begun, and suddenly God appears and says, "Obey me and you will live."

It's quite strange. It's impossible to live a week without food at minus 30 degrees, and the temperature will continue to drop, which is even more strange and nonsensical!

If you don't know, 95% of web novels are now written with the help of a neural network. If you read carefully, it becomes obvious. However, the main point is that the neural network helps to adapt a pre-existing scenario, so anyone who claims that it was written by AI is a complete fool.

I forgot to add why you constantly have to remind him how many points he earns when they become almost useless when all the skills enter the time-controlled zone

The author's logic is very strange. If you don't improve your beginner's breathing technique and just spend a few points that you get for free, and wait for a better technique to appear, how long will it take? Will you be a grandmaster by then? The idea is not bad, but the focus is on unnecessary details that you want to skip.

It's quite strange and not reasonable, to beat up kaguto just because he's a quasi-warrior and looked at you wrong... the growth rate of power is too high.

My English is bad so I'm using AI. The originality is quite weak, which is the biggest downside. They're being drawn into a new digitized world where they have to survive and become stronger, but the fauna is earthly (disappointing), resulting in a typical game world. This is also normal, as every novel is being digitized, so there's a lack of originality, and it's boring. For example, when bears appeared from the rift, my interest quickly waned, and I simply skipped over it. No matter how strong MS becomes, it's useless without interesting original ideas, but the earthly fauna in the otherworld is very boring.

Is this a jamb or is there still a moon?

After reading three chapters, I also understood why it needs to be improved.