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TeaDragon1

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Hey guys, I am just starting out with writing novels. Please tell me if there are any improvements that I can make! Other than that, I hope you enjoy! -TeaDragon

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  • TeaDragon1
    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to RandomIsGood

    It will be explained soon.

    Ch 34 Strategy
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Should_Be_Working

    I did not want his spirit manipulation abilities to be overpowered at the start as that would limit his growth. After he levels up (level 3), he will be exploring creative methods like this.

    Ch 31 True Monster
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Vito_Crodell

    This is definitely something that I have begun considering. From about chapter 33 onwards, a new character will be introduced that will stimulate Ren's development. As for the 'magnets' idea. I will definitely consider integrating it into Ren's abilities later in the story. Thanks for the feedback.

    [Ding! You have gained the skill 'Spirit Compression'! Your Spirit has increased!]
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Starcat777

    Guess :)

    Ch 30 Evil Plot
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Frizent

    Gracias por los comentarios.

    Ch 13 Hunt (Part 2)
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Jso7474

    Good try. This is definitely an AU but it is not set in the past. There is a very good reason for why the Pokemon were hatched on the beach (Arceus did not spawn them and they were not randombly left there). Everything will be explained later. Continue Reading!

    Ch 28 Daily Life and Improvements
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to CockroaChan

    I just added a level (I changed that to a times now) so that you can differentiate between different amounts of compression. For example: x1 = Compression 1 time x2 = Compression 2 times - stronger and more powerful This is a made up skill.

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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Phoenix_Paradise

    His potential does not follow conventional logic. In order to account for any changes to his race and other skills that he has, I have decided to not include potential.

    'Status'
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Phoenix_Paradise

    The scaling of pokemon in this world will be different. This is so that when Ren becomes really long, other pokemon do not seem too short.

    It was a large bipedal pokemon. Its body was about 2 meters tall. Its limbs were thick and bulging.
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Endless_Suffering

    There are two reasons for the difference in skills. 1. As I have stated in my Auxilary Chapter, this fanficition is a blend of Pokemon with the HunterxHunter power system. I did this to give the pokemon a larger variety of moves. 2. This is a fanfiction, not the original. Limiting each pokemon to their Original skills would not only limit the fights but also make these fights more predictable. This is why I allowed them to learn skills that they would not ordinarily use while also including my own original skills. I am sorry if this upset you. As for the Pokemon sizes, this is another change that I made, to make Ren's progress more dicernable (greater improvements every time he levels up). In the future, when Ren becomes extremely long, it would not make sense for all the other pokemon to be their original heights. I do not think I was clear enough about this. I will add a note in the first few chapters, explaining what this fan fiction is, so that new readers do not get confused. I will also try to incorporate more moves from the original into this fanficition to make it more appealing. Thank you for the feedback, TeaDragon1.

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  • TeaDragon1
    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Roon_Toon1

    I have redited chapters 1 and 2, adding a 0 before the decimal place. Hopefully, this is better.

    Ch 3 Infant (Part 2)
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Orthanos

    I will address this in my next chapter. See you then :)

    Ch 23 Full Capacity
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Orthanos

    Still the same week.

    Ch 22 Massacre
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  • TeaDragon1
    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Jso7474

    Not in the immediate future. This First Arc will be focued on getting stronger and fighting monsters. Humans will appear in the Second Arc.

    Ch 16 Trap (Part 2)
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Genist

    I will try to incorporate more slice of life elements further down into the story. Companions are also coming... hopefully.

    Ch 14 Hunt (Part 3)
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Bluebermm

    Skill percentages will not stop at 100. Something special will happen.

    Ch 6 Bloody Beach (Part 3)
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to Reapertmn3

    It won't be set in the normal pokemon world nor will the world have extremely large altercations. The setting will be different but not too different. Some of the original characters from the anime will also appear. I can't give away any more than that. Keep reading to find out more.

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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to dragonNEET2567

    Thanks.

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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to CockroaChan

    I will definitely make him strong but it is going to be gradual. I don't want to nerf the MC when he gets too strong too fast.

    The subarc is nearly finished! I hope you guys have enjoyed the ride so far. The next subarc will definitely be more focused on training and evolving.
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    TeaDragon13yr
    Replied to CockroaChan

    Thanks

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