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lazy_af22dCommentedCh 456 Pokemon Company! - One move to decimate alldetailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor- lazy_af6mthCommentedCh 12 12: Path of Chakra and Science in the Shinobi World
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Lol 😆
Not to be outdone, Obadiah followed closely behind, his legs sprayed flames like a rocket, emitting a large amount of black exhaust. (E/N: Dudes, Global Warming? Where the protesters at?) - lazy_af9mthCommented
It's better to write like "--- months later", instead of like this. The more precise timeing you give the more readers will skip past it.
{06:31 PM, 18 May 78 Yrs} (Note the Time skip) - lazy_af10mthReplied to kamidemond
The thing the namakien did for Krillin and old king Kai for gohan.
[Ding. The system found that the host is Human and no Transformation power can be given to the host]. - lazy_af10mthReplied to Jcbro
He was the reincarnation of veldanava, therefore had enough energy to do pull things like that. Not every run of the mill character can do that.
{Confirmation complete. Acquiring Ultimate Skill [God of Death: Hades]... Unsuccessful...} - lazy_af10mthCommentedCh 7 First Task
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All of your dialogues seems so .... fake. As if they are written just for the sake of being there.
Asuma chuckled. "I know what you mean. Choji's appetite can be a bit of a challenge, but he's also one of the strongest members of my team. Shikamaru's intelligence and resourcefulness will definitely come in handy. And Ino is the perfect push for these two boys with troublesome personalities." - lazy_af10mthCommented
And that means Naruto and Sasuke failed !
[Day 1073: You have reached the end Scenario of your World. Simulation Terminated!] - lazy_af10mthReplied to Kratos_theLycaon
Bro other than Transformers begins , can you suggest me some good ones.
Speaking of this Transformers, not many people may remember. After all, "Transformers" was a popcorn movie, and there were numerous Autobots appearing, besides the main characters like Bumblebee and Optimus Prime, it's hard to recall the rest if you're not a die-hard fan. - lazy_af11mthCommented
Noice, Character development !
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Tbh I find story really interesting, would be a real shame if you drop it.
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I guess he's not getting points regularly now that he's way stronger than them
[Strength]: 92 - lazy_af11mthCommented
As long as this doesn't affect the story I'm gonna ignore this part.
"I know Ayame. I still don't smoke but when I made this before I have tried to inhale and I am sure that this was pretty fine." Aoto replied in a whisper. His age was still too young to legally smoke so he had to come up with a lie. The police was still under the Uchiha Clan and he didn't think that these arrogant ninjas would care for a commoner like him who smoked a little too early. - lazy_af11mthCommented
Ladies killer*
'My appearance is really striking, nowhere close to my last face, I'll grow to be a killer ladies huh' - lazy_af11mthCommented
Is this a translation ?
"If I had even an inkling that an old, yet powerful man like him was still in existence, I would have never dared to set foot in the Uzumaki country, even if I had a thousand guts," lamented Daichi, the esteemed leader of Iwagakure. - lazy_af11mthCommented
This one seems more interesting
1) Doctor Strange plotline, as I explained Yao overused the time stone so she now has to deal with its aftermath, including the events of her death, i.e. Dormamu would come earlier and she can't use the stone so she would manipulate Dr. Strange to join the Kamar Taj, while Batman joins this plot with the development of another Wayne expansion in the field of hospitals. - lazy_af1yrCommented
The dialogues are getting really confusing. If I hadn't watched the movie I wouldn't even get who's saying these things.
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