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Soafa17hReplied to GuardianofNightNyxAlright, so translator is breaking immersion by not translating correctly
Tang Yu and Kerry used to hang out quite often. He knew Kerry was very open-minded and couldn't stop thinking about his big brother Johnny. With this in mind, he did wonder about the nature of Kerry's relationship with Michiko Arasaka—perhaps it was similarly open?- Soafa23hCommented
Seems a bit extreme, he could just arrest bradley
Meanwhile Axel had returned to his Pelicans and departed the ONI base. He knew they were under orders from Admiral Parangosky but Lieutenant Commander Bradley constantly ignored rank and just tried to carry out his orders. If he wanted to, he could have continued to argue with him, but he didn't want the situation to turn into something else, because if he did have a gunfight with the Lieutenant Commander Bradley, then he would have probably been called for treason and hunted down. - Soafa1dCommented
Author, why dont you ever fix all these naming issues? I love this story so it's sad to see how you constantly break the immersion with such a easily fixed problem
Tang Yu and Kerry used to hang out quite often. He knew Kerry was very open-minded and couldn't stop thinking about his big brother Johnny. With this in mind, he did wonder about the nature of Kerry's relationship with Michiko Arasaka—perhaps it was similarly open? - Soafa2dCommented
Not the Emperor
Saburo once played rock before altering his demeanor upon returning to Arasaka. - Soafa2dCommented
Dude, the Emperor is not trapped in Kyoto. You really need to get better at names
Saburo Arasaka was somewhat trapped in Kyoto, waiting for his opportunity. - Soafa2dCommented
it was the maelstrom, not the voodo boys
Kate had seen the operation report; it mainly stated that the Voodoo Boys had premeditated a trade to acquire the military-grade Sandevistan cyberware. - Soafa2dCommented
This paragraf makes no sense
"Hey, I'm going to work in those places where the birds don't shit. Sometimes I also think, can't we take a year off? Anyway, save a little. If you usually rely on hunting and fishing, the money is not enough. Why? Have to run out every year and suffer from that bird?" - Soafa3dCommented
No one would believe he just happened to come across a Vault, it's obvious he knew it was there. How would he explain his knowledge of the Vaults existence and location?
Axel clarified, "We came across a Forerunner Vault that held a map pointing to another colony called Arcadia. However, as we were leaving, the Covenant attacked us; we believe they had tracked our Pelicans. We're not sure if they were aware of the location of the Vault before but now, they are, so I intend to go to Arcadia soon and uncover why the map pointed us there." - Soafa3dCommentedCh 250 Chapter LXXI: Valerica Volkihar
- Soafa3dCommentedCh 51 Chapter 51: Training or Hell?
- Soafa3dCommentedCh 131 Chapter 130
- Soafa4dCommented
Only males lift their leg, females just crouch
The room was silent except for the soft ticking of her claws on the stone floor until she halted in front of another display case. With no further ado, she lifted her leg and relieved herself. - Soafa4dCommented
Ah come on! Kill Yorinobu!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Soafa6dReplied to BlackNilton
I don't want to give you my email, I'd rather just critize stuff.
"I'll be here for you in your toughest moments, so you don't need to be afraid. As I said earlier, I'll hold your hand and we'll walk together." - Soafa7dCommentedCh 126 Chapter 125
- Soafa7dCommentedCh 30 Basilisk
- Soafa9dCommented
cringe
"I'll be here for you in your toughest moments, so you don't need to be afraid. As I said earlier, I'll hold your hand and we'll walk together."