Ainz950

excluding that the story is fire :)

personally I think the main issue that I found in the last chapters is the presence of a word followed by 3 synonyms, that is typical of chatgpt. fictional example "it was bad. terrible.horrible." this was not present in the initial chapters and it is very artificial to read, also in some chapters you find 3/4 sentences like that. I think you need to add in the prompt to avoid doing that.

this is what I understood: it creates a fog of little stars near the users, these stars when touched give the information to the user, so he can perceive attacks, after some time the one that touched the stars is freezed and marked, the mark can be transferred to the owner, if what is marked is an ability, the mark can be used to direct his first ability when is going back it also seems that can avoid objects till it reach the marked person, but this chapter make me confuse, so maybe cannot avoid o the user can decide? the limitation are that the user cannot feel powerful emotions (said in the chapters before) and must perceive death (was a limitation that was said when creating the ability)

I am confused, where the previous owner came from? I mean, as a person kf this world he should know what is outside here no? the manager is not suspicious of this kind of questions?

Unfortunately, this novel just doesn’t click with me. I’ve genuinely tried to get into it, but several elements make the story feel artificial and forced. • The Plot – The main character constantly throws himself into extremely dangerous situations with no real plan, relying entirely on luck to survive. A clear example is the contract at the beginning with Shia, where he essentially gambles with his life without any guarantee of success. • Character Progression and Tropes – The story reminds me a lot of stereotypical Chinese webnovels: the overpowered main character who becomes stronger than lifelong masters in just a couple of months, the crowd that always says “there’s no way he can do it” right before he does exactly that, and constant one-sided bets where the protagonist defeats clearly more experienced or powerful opponents just because he's the main character. I might give it a second chance in the future, but for now, I just can’t bring myself to continue.

the best fanfic of mushoku tensei that I ever read, the story is incredible. the mc is not following the classic script, he has no knowledge of the story so it is taking a completely different route from the normal fanfic, and imho this one of the strongest point. the writing is very good and the world building is exceptional (the author know the world of mushoku tensei very well) Author good work!!!

Really one of the best stories in this platform! The story is very complex and interesting, with also a mc that grows chapter by chapter.

the story has from my pov several issues: first of all the translation quality, in 40 chapters the different levels to identify the skills of the practitioner has different translation names, I have count 5 different translation to name these levels. second point, the story, the idea is not bad, but in 40 chapters 95% of the story are other characters saying how talented is the mc... It is not my cup of tea.

Yes but he is talking about the child of the True Creator, of course 'He' can influence it, another point is that 0-08 is hiding from Adam, referring about 'Him', even indirectly, can be perceived

i don t think is Adam, probably is the true creator