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uh.. rhein and mizari? you mean Rain and Misery? you should read the wiki of your fanfic verse when writing bro..

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you're right, unfortunately.

interesting novel, with revenge mc as the core. however, each chapter has many case of pronoun mistakes and incomprehensible sentences. honestly did not deserve it's 4.5 star ratings, but good enough to read to past time if you're not a grammar police like me.

is it only me who noticed that the author mentions servants as minions? 😵

interesting story, but you really need an editor or proofreader, to minimize mistakes before updating your story. in this chapter i see spikes in mistakes compared to the previous ones. anyway, good job and keep getting better!

hmm.. shouldn't monkey King be in Chinese myology? he is one of Jade emperor's heavenly general right? why did he become Indra's lackey? did you confuse Chinese mythology and Indian's?

reading until this chapter, i realize this novel is just a poorly edited mtl -_-

really need to be edited before uploading, as it is clear that mistakes often appears and consistency left much to be desired i hope this will get better since the premise is interesting i mean, why be a normie pirate when you can be a filthy rich celestial dragon instead?

only one word i can say is: MOAARRR😝