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Augustdavis3dCommentedCh 23 Ability Assessment - Liberacíon- Augustdavis23dCommented
I feel like you should make the ranking system clearer. was the queen mother stronger than the red cloud headmistress because you said she was already in blood longevity. if she was why was she worried about her son facing the red cloud.
Ch 43 The Red Cloud Theocracy In Shambles! - Augustdavis1mthCommented
ok, I'll wait an hour
[A/N: Unedited Chapters. I'm sorry Guys, Just give me an Hour] - Augustdavis1mthCommentedCh 450 New Divine Grade Element: Origin Wrath Lightning
- Augustdavis2mthPosted
sometimes I have no idea who or what your talking about. I understand that your Grammer might not be so great but at least can you stick to one name when describing the different realms, and can you make a glossary/Auxiliary chapter that explains the different realms in every type of cultivation you've written about.
- Augustdavis2mthCommentedCh 4 Maxing Out : Nine Saber Styles Technique!
- Augustdavis3mthCommentedCh 1418 L Teammate (2)
- Augustdavis3mthCommentedCh 1374 Impromptu Family Trip
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- Augustdavis5mthReplied to JustgotshotCh 1320 Academy
- Augustdavis7mthReplied to ObserverFaker
he wasn't talking about the self destruct skill
"I have not tried this yet, and you might be the best target to try the skill," Tang Shaoyang was talking about the Destructive Strike, the skill he got after learning the Way of Destruction class. There were three active and three passive skills granted by the class with one of them being the suicide skill. He did not have the chance to try the skill yet, and this was the time, 'I just hope it's as destructive as its name.' - Augustdavis7mthReplied to Augustdavis
- Augustdavis8mthCommentedCh 1034 You can still join in, you know? I won’t mind.
- Augustdavis9mthCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7 - Hypocrite
- Augustdavis1yrCommentedCh 339 Chapter 339:- Repercussion of War
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- Augustdavis1yrCommented
the novel is great so far. I love how the story of reincarnation with a system is being told from the villains point of view. the only thing that confuses me is that you keep making mistakes about Zhou yuan cultivation, a few chapters back he advanced from third level true qi to 4th level but i think two or three chapters after that when you showed his status again it still says third level. then after he gained the heavenly demon power he advanced to the 7th level why does it still say third level true qi in this chapter. also I get that the protagonist have immense talent and luck but why does it seem like they are able to cross levels and fight Zhou yuan while he can't do thesame even though he has the system and a special physique, and powerful techniques
Ch 189 Act like villain