honestly thank you. I can tell you put a lot of work into it but there's no way I'm reading all that

I'm guessing Orion is one of Naka's experiment to create the perfect being. maybe that's why Orion is from another universe. he probably needed a soul not from this universe

sometimes I don't know who is speaking

I feel like you should make the ranking system clearer. was the queen mother stronger than the red cloud headmistress because you said she was already in blood longevity. if she was why was she worried about her son facing the red cloud.

ok, I'll wait an hour

the leader of the EIA should still be stronger

sometimes I have no idea who or what your talking about. I understand that your Grammer might not be so great but at least can you stick to one name when describing the different realms, and can you make a glossary/Auxiliary chapter that explains the different realms in every type of cultivation you've written about.

this is so confusing. there's no explanation about a lot of things happening

these chapters are really short. but thanks for tye update

I'm confused. do you mean that the original village is in the centre while the first border surrounds the village in like a circle and the second does the same to the first while the third surrounds the second?

well, these 2 chapters were useless

u mean since September

I bet you he's going to come back with a sob story

what's going on

he wasn't talking about the self destruct skill

He's been getting better with update stability

still waiting for the chapters

this is so confusing

the progress is so slow, and the chapters are short

the author always changes the time of the latest release to make it seem like a chapter was just uploaded today.