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So let me get this straight the mc has no friends and otherwise almost no interest in any humans, He is easily bored and constantly looking for entertainment or something to research. That's how you are portraying the mc, yet at the same time he is actively requesting the phantom troupe to kill Pito because he is too lazy??????????????? how does this make sense what possible entertainment could that provide? he already know all the abelites of Pito and the phantom troupe he is just wasting time. From this I can only assume that you are going to use this as a plot device to have the mc constantly making stupid ass decisions under the pretext that its "entertaining".
A cold blooded psychopathy that has lived for century's finds interest and amusement in antagonizing children??? I understand WE know Gon is special but at this point all the mc knows of Gon is that he is a naïve child with some talent, so why even look at him twice? I hope that with such a old and jaded mc you wont make him have the maturity of a child in his interactions going forward
Why? 3 times now he has had the opportunity and means the kill the firelord, yet the reason for not doing it is another fire lord will replace him???? I hate when authors create a character that is OP and intelligent compared to his pears but when its crunch time they turn into morons. The solution is simple kill fire lord, making the fire nation fear you then he doesn't want the throne thrown it to Zuko! it has stated over 50 times that he is basically immortal so if another war hungry dude comes along then kill him. You are trying to weave an intricate plot of politics in a world where strength rules. its impractical not to mention while he is twiddling his thumbs waiting for the "right time" people are dying everyday. TLDR: author made a "smart" and op mc but decided to make him an indecisive moron at the end.