the fights are very good. having the pokemon's point of view during the fight would be interesting ps: you're not going to make all the girls bi, it's the mc who should have a harem, not zoé 🤣

very good story with real, very long chapters, I just find it disappointing that the author goes through the training phases so quickly but hey, we're still at the beginning, it's definitely going to come later

très bonne histoire une des meilleures que j'ai pu l'ire et je pense qu'elle mérite plus de visibilité. (Juste je déteste le contrôle mental est j ai vu trop d histoire ou le méchant décide d'utiliser c ette capaciter sur le love interes à chaque fois sa a juste complètement gâcher l histoire) mais bon c est juste une inquiétude que jai j'espère être agréable surpri de l'utilisation que l auteurs en ferai

severus and lily is a horrible concept. it's unhealthy it spits on the concept of mourning of choice (she chose james is her relationship with james was fine yes time it's gone but then!!!) (in addition if she saw the harry potters she must to know that it is about him that voldemor kill her she is her husband is to modi her son he has to prove that he deserves forgiveness but that is all !! ps I like this fanfic a lot but it makes me cringe every time I see it's together En savoir plus sur ce texte sourceVous devez indiquer le texte source pour obtenir des informations supplémentaires Envoyer des commentaires Panneaux latéraux