omg man you have write very good novel but no you right short chapters and the story go slow man i hate when good story goes like this

man you make me wanna broke my pc

if he can wake up and become immortal i will drop this novel

so this is the end of story ??????????????????????

make it short

thanks you its really good new fanfic can you make chapters faster

so you are author of this fan or what ?

thanks and please don't drop this novel you have good and new idea

do you drop this novel ?

cultivation there is 5 or less about it

can you tell the name of novel from fanfiction.net when salazar is snake

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more please

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thank you for the story whis is very good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

nice and just finish it as you want don't care about anyone its fanfic for some reason

thanks for chapter and please don't drop this story

do you drop this ???????

more chapter and make mc more move in the worlds he travel to thanks for chapter

drop when i was think its will be good one