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Tidas17hCommentedWell this a bad start to a novel.
...A few moments ago...- Tidas3dCommented
If your going to use emoji dont use the color ones, their very distracting.
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+1
3. Turn him into a waifu (which means in this au issei was born as a girl not a boy, hope this one doesn't get the votes.) - Tidas4dReplied to Express_007
Well im blind then i missed them might want put marking for it.
I'm not sure if I did Amaris justice here but I hope you like her. If I were to describe her it would shy, bold, and caring but so far I feel like I just showed the shy and caring parts. Either way, she'll get plenty of time in the spotlight so we'll see in the future how things have gone. - Tidas4dCommented
If you had a stone from the comic version maybe.
"Can you understand me buddy?" I asked the stone. - Tidas4dCommented
Depends on the version.
Charls Xavier is also a cause of concern, but he's mostly seen to be a coward so I think approaching him diplomatically would be nice. - Tidas4dCommented
Detective skills he was trained by batman
Dick Greyson is great, but I have Nolan Greyson so he's not needed. Like at all. But I'll still assimilate with him though. - Tidas4dCommented
Meh aunt cass is kinda useless and downgrade from mj and gwen appearance wise. Gwen would be more useful all round with intelligence too.
Unless of course the woman in question is Aunt Cass or Nico Robin. - Tidas4dCommented
No clue she even based off this time if you keep adding oc’s,then add a character chapter for them.
I'm not sure if I did Amaris justice here but I hope you like her. If I were to describe her it would shy, bold, and caring but so far I feel like I just showed the shy and caring parts. Either way, she'll get plenty of time in the spotlight so we'll see in the future how things have gone. - Tidas4dCommented
Does he retain thing he learned?
**< Gorilla Grodd Intelligence Has Been Activated >** - Tidas4dCommented
All of this seems stupid and batman going majorly on his case.
Back on Earth, Miles was gearing up. He'd parked his old, nondescript sedan a safe distance from the prison and was now adjusting his makeshift mask one last time. "Here goes nothing," he whispered to himself, feeling a mix of adrenaline and anxiety course through his veins. - Tidas8dReplied to MapleHound
Yeah i know what your talking about,saw ads for them on YouTube can’t remember the name.i would not recomend them havent tried it my self but saw a video on someone testing if they even work. all he smelt/tasted was chemicals taste at first and other pople tasted the flavor, later after letting it sit he could taste it.but yeah varies from person to person and l realy dont want chance what is in the fake smells from china.
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Are we missing a chapter ??? Im confused.
"It's been almost a month since Unkai died of a heart attack..." - Tidas10dReplied to MapleHound
Yep lol ive put my coffe lid on my other cup and drank water still tasted like was drinkng coffe the rest of the day lol
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Harry said in a quiet voice. - Tidas14dCommented
... harry again can we have some peace go back your timeline.
Salazar said by the end of Harry's explanation. - Tidas14dCommented
Dang you harry not even born and you still make a appearance.
Harry nodded before he remembered He mentioned a library. - Tidas14dCommented
Never heard of him.
He had everything in his playlist starting from Swae Lee right down to XXXTentacion, he wouldn't feel too good if he lost everything that had kept him company during Childhood. - Tidas14dCommented
....seriously this would been better not to mention. All you done is give him two women right at the start with no build up to the relationship, from the reader point of view, killling a great deal interest in the characters and story.
What only makes Sterl uncomfortable is that he didn't have mastery level skills before. In the past, after fucking Linna in bed, he could only face Rayna, who had stronger endurance and mastery in martial arts, with resentment and defeat.