Negativchaos

yep + for the her peerage mental problems but i think it was simply lazy writing from the og author since Rias not that dumb most of the time when issei is not involved and from psyholigcal perspective neither Velena or the siscon satan wouldnt left Rias with such an unstable peerage even than somehow issei solved the years of neglagated mental problems with ease

yep so thiccccc it can tank the full nuclear winter from Fallout if i remember correctly somewhere in the novel he died and great red and ophis made a new body for him the funny thing is the og author of danmachi made the same nonsense plotarmor and scaling to temu Emiya Shirou((visual novel) bell cranel) with power of the supreme simp and the plot armor strike (argonaut) with a bonus if he is charmed he gets regenaratiion

eh atleast only the lemons there is an author on webnovel who shall not be named who post 30 chapter with questinable quality and after that every da a ch with patreon ad and nothing else and when someone call out him for it or comments on the writing he calls them poor peasent and other insults

so Adam and Eve was sealed

how should i say it the if i remember correctly she is the only one who doesn't get any real character development in the LN but she gets the public humiliaton from issei power ups and the switch princess title(pretty much mockery from my perspective). Issei truly loves her i can aknowlage but even though she is a spoiled princess and not the best king, she does not deserve what issei puts her through so i never liked that pairing

sad best boi wolf noises

after five or six re reading of this fic always shrudder when i see this both from disgust and maybe a rice grain size of anticipation of alex beating the enterie crew of one piece for sharing a single braincell most of the time with the idiot stick

well for example the interaction in ch 2 with sirchez and the au gremory family which went from the original to cultivation novel style , lucian who knows rias for years somehow never met her peerage and other incosistent elements other than those above on webnovel original fanfic is hard to find nowdays just massproduced translated works

honestly your first fic was pretty good expect the renting about us gun laws and history and since it is not a translation already better than the recent fics on the site(or app)

she goes by souna shitori in the academy